February 3, 2009

My first poem

A hobby i had
to read all good,
born from it,
a desire to write,
express,react and
pen memories...

He smiled
on the idea,
quite amused
by my sudden zeal;
"what can you
write any way?"

Hurt but not
a poem i wrote,
about me and him,
For challenging me.
It inspired me to pen
a "thank you" ode to you

He smiled again,
now proudly. for me
and my write.
I blushed,
my spirits soaring,
glad for his liking.

PS : This is a true account of how i started writing poetry about two years back !!


  1. Hi!
    Lovely blog.
    Cute poem :)
    I write too. can i join your blog ??
    Check out my blog!

  2. aweeee... beautiful Prats... such cuteness and innocence.. :)

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  4. Thats short and as cutesie...,as it gets.. sweet one: )

  5. Awww! Kinda similar to how i started... =)

    Why do they challenge us? TO bring out the best in us, I guess :)

  6. thanksie Pink !! I will always be thankful of this friend of mine to open a new world for me .. or how else would i have been here ??

  7. prats, i am glad u started poetry!

    i loved this piece, esp. bcoz its the starting point of the queen's journey!

  8. Thanks Kings :)

    @Nan : Thankuuuu :D

  9. true said Raash.. sometimes challenges bring the best out of us.. like this contest brought out this cute poem...

  10. thanks Akanksha ..

    @Leo : well, u need to see the first poem i wrote ... will post it someday...


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