February 9, 2009

The Adventures of StepMAN: Blogisode 2

# Co-written by Asbah n Sandeep

Stephy had dozed off again. There was nothing dearer to Stephy than sleep. Even if it would be at the expense of seniors wrath at not attending the PDP sessions (Personality Development Sessions). No sooner had he dozed off that he started snoring magically magnified to deafening volumes.

Krghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh….pheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee……krghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…pheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….krghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…pheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….snore followed by a whistle…Stephy sounded rhythmic even in his snores.

Meanwhile in the adjacent room, Chirag could not get himself to sleep. This rhythmic snoring was getting to his nerves. He had just moved in to the room adjacent to Stephy’s. He had heaved a sigh of relief when he had been allowed to skip the PDP session for today. He was bed ridden with high fever. Krghhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…pheeeeeeeeeeeeeeee…krghhhhhhhhhhhhhh…pheeeeeeeeeeee…the snores were getting all the more irritating.

Abhe yaar!! Yeh kaun apne naak aur mooh ki varjish itni raat ko kar raha hain. Kambhakth sone nahi dete chain se. Seniors se chutkaara paaya toh yeh mahaashay ki aawaaz makhi ki tarah binbina rahi hain kaano main”, Chirag cursed his luck.

He managed to get out of his bed with much difficulty and walked into the adjoining room. His jaw dropped when he saw Stephy sleeping with his legs raised and arms wide spread. He was snoring away to glory. The synchronized movements of his pot belly and lips amazed him. Every snore was acting like a lever which would help raise his legs with each intake of breath. They would fall with a thud when he would breathe out, resulting in a shrill whistle as well.

Yeh kyaa hain bhe. Kaunsi khet ki mooli hain re baap yeh!! Abhe oye mutton ki dukaan…Kumbhakaran ki chatti aulad….uth bhe mote. Abhe gubbare ki wholesale dukaan, yeh band kar yaar. Hadh ho gayi ab toh. Yeh toh hil bhi nahi raha yaar. Hmmmmm….Abhe oye miniature mount everest…hil…uth…jag…uffff!! Marr gaya hain kya?? Hmmm…let me open the windows at least. Thodi toh aawaz kam aayegi baaju ke room main”, Chirag said to himself.

He opened the windows which were tightly shut. He noticed that there were no grills on this window, unlike his room. Chirag made a last attempt at waking him up. He did not move a single muscle. Neither was Chirag able to move him by an inch. He simply lay there like a rock. Resigning to his fate and cursing his luck, Chirag headed to his room.

No sooner had he left that a monkey surfaced on the window. The smell of bananas kept on Stephy’s desk had forced him to climb up the building to the top floor. He jumped in and started gorging on the bananas. One after the other, he finished all but he was still hungry. He looked around for more food. Precisely at that moment Stephy turned around in bed and his blanket fell off. He was wearing boxers with pictures of watermelon, bananas and other fruits on the back. Stephy’s love for boxers with pictures was well known among people who knew him. The monkey could not resist himself at the sight of the watermelon. He had not had one in a long time. He made a dash for it and dug his teeth deep into the watermelon.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhhhh”, Stephy screamed at the top of his voice. He sprang out of his bed and made a dash towards the dormitory. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh…aaawwww….mummyyyyyyyyyyyyy!! Shoo shoo…hat hat hat….aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh…aaawwww….mummyyyyyyyyyy!! Shoo shoo”, Stephy was trying hard to shake away the monkey while still on the run. The monkey did not let go off his hold. He dug his teeth deeper into the watermelon. He was hell bent on eating it. “Prrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr”, came away the portion of the boxer with the watermelon on it, leaving a big hole on his back. The monkey let go and ran in the opposite direction with his catch clenched tightly between his teeth. He surely would have got an A grade if this would have been a crafts exam for the sheer perfection shown in tearing off only the picture of the watermelon from the midst of other fruits on the boxer. What a neat cut the monkey had made on Stephy’s boxer, leaving a perfect round hole on his back. Stephy was howling in pain. The monkey had really taken a dig on his back and it was stinging where he had just bit him. Tears had swelled up in Stephy’s eyes because of the intensity of the pain and he had lost all sense of direction. He was too scared to look behind.

A couple of rooms away Kajal and Rashi, the most organized of all, were preparing for their appearance in front of the seniors, loads of makeup, loads of extra bits of everything. Kohl. Mascare. Rouge. Gloss. Dressing up in the best way they could because they were asked to. Neha peeped into their rooms and shouted, “Room no. 215 in two minutes flat juniors. You better be there on time. Else you had it. And what is this you have done to yourself? We had asked you to dress up for a ragging session. Not for my wedding. Follow me. Enough of make up”. Kajal and Rashi left their room without bothering to lock it in a spate of hurry. Stephy had no idea that in his mad rush to nowhere, he had actually run into the girl’s hostel. The first floor of the girl’s hostel was allotted to the juniors and wore a deserted look because the juniors were entertaining the seniors in their respective rooms. The pain was getting intense and unbearable. Stephy desperately wanted to splash some water on his back. He still had a feeling that he was being followed by the monkey. His legs had started paining because of the marathon run that he had just been a part of. All the rooms were locked. He looked around desperately for an unlocked room. And there it was! A room which was inviting him within. Stephy did not stop and barged in. That was when he heard a monkey bark in anger in close vicinity. He got into an unlocked cupboard and hid himself. The fear mixed with the unbearable pain made him lose his consciousness. There he lay slumped in the cupboard with his mouth gaping.

Meanwhile in the same cupboard, a male spider was out on hunt for food, his two little babies and their mother was enjoying a comic series of spider-hero, ManSpider and waiting for daddly to come back home. Little did they know that daddy will have an adventurous journey back home. Out there daddy has just caught the heaviest of flies and was happy that he'll be able to feed the children for a week and he would enjoy the SWW (spider wide web) and would sip sappachino. But at that very moment, his 4th and 6th leg slipped, and before he could balance himself he stumbled, down down and way down. Nature has its way of deciding things and down he landed right on the tongue of Stephy’s open mouth. Stephy swallowed him. Down he went into his system and mixed with his blood. With great struggle, the male spider managed to hold on to one of his internal organs and claw his way back to his food pipe and from there to the outside world. Stephy coughed and turned around in the wardrobe.

Their wardrobe was the epitome of perfection. Neatly folded clothes, Handbags on one side, in the upper portion Rashi's colors and Kajal's cosmetic were decorously placed! And to add to it the beautiful smell of perfumes! What an ambiance! No wonder Stephy had gone into a deep slumber. Stephy twisted once again and as the consequence ended up wrapping upon his boxers the perfect knee length shocking pink skirt Kajal had decided to wear the upcoming morning. And that too, with luck, wrapped to perfection.

He stretched in sleep and his hand touched the shelf in the wardrobe and everything lightly displaced itself. Two things happened that very moment. Kajal's powder foundation was sprinkled on his face making him as white as a ghost. Rashi’s bottle of purging croton (jamalgota) emptied itself into Stephy’s open mouth.

That very moment the girls entered their room, completely drained after their ragging experience. Rashi headed straight to her bed without bothering to change. Kajal wanted to change to her night suit before dozing off. She headed towards her wardrobe to take out her blue pajamas.


  1. i have never been so entertained all my life..wow!

    Kajal's makeup, shocking pink skirt....lol..

    and by the way the monkey and its love for watermelon... hhaahaaahahhaaa

    wonderful to say the least... looking forward to more masti!! :)
    prologue aur pehle to kuchh bhi nahin tha... entertainment ki dukaan to ab khuli hai... :)

  2. hey by the way will Kajal faint after seeing stepMAN in her wardrobe wearing her pink skirt?

    I have never fainted in my life.. this one would be my first experience if at all that happens.. waiting for more.. :)

  3. hehe stil lolling...

    his encounter with monkey was most amazing.......hahaha

    and i liked the way u expressed chirags expression to wake up the sleeping giant hahahaha and poor he had to go ....

    monkey one i loved woaaa.....hehehe

    daddy spider one was funny toooo

    but i never imagined that poor monkey was desperate for foods so that he pulled out watermelons on his boxers hehehehe......

    last few lines were superb lovd ittttguys

    whoever wrote it ...damm funny
    hope how wud kajal reacts after seeing stepMAN with that white make up and with her pink skirt


    monkey one and chirags woe ...superb hehehehe ...kudos to u both ...

    give me a chance for upcoming parts

  4. “Yeh kyaa hain bhe. Kaunsi khet ki mooli hain re baap yeh!! Abhe oye mutton ki dukaan…Kumbhakaran ki chatti aulad….uth bhe mote. Abhe gubbare ki wholesale dukaan, yeh band kar yaar. Hadh ho gayi ab toh. Yeh toh hil bhi nahi raha yaar. Hmmmmm….Abhe oye miniature mount everest…hil…uth…jag…uffff!! Marr gaya hain kya?? Hmmm…let me open the windows at least. Thodi toh aawaz kam aayegi baaju ke room main”

    hey hope this description was not for me haaan.....coz mein motta nahi hun bhaaiiiii lolzzz

  5. aray ste you'll grow thinner in next posts why worry ;) Meat ki dukaan !!

    rigorous exercises to fit for superhero will help you reduce. dont worry, keep following it ;)

    Thankyou Guru :)

  6. Rofl @ the story..

    And rashi belonging to the most organised lot ...ha ha..yeh baat kuuch hajam nahi hui :P

    Humour was brilliant :)

  7. @blogger singh

    he he he..thanx a ton kajal...we had said..that prologue is just for the start bit...n the last minute changes also didnt help the first part...didnt give me much breathing space..but yaa..as u said...entertainment ki dukaan ab khuli hain...aur ab toh sale bhi lagne waali hain...he he...

    a pat on the back for asbah for visualising the skirt scene...even the make up scene n other bits related to girls were penned by her...her first attempt at humour was worth it...the watermelon n the monkey idea along with chirag bit were the products of my twisted brain..he he...brace urself...loads of fun awaits you all...

    hmmmm...so u have never fainted in ur life haan..that bit is helpful...will see to it in the next installment...he he...

    hail stepMAN...with great powers come great responsibilities...

  8. @ste

    superb comment bro...kitne baar superb likha hain tune comment main...me n asbah are glad that you liked it...the fact that you liked it means the most to us and we have achieved what we set out for...asbah made u wear the skirt...i made u wear the boxer n made the monkey bite you...asbah made u swallow the spider and was the reason behind the white powder on ur face...i tried in vain with chirag to move you out of bed and that bottle of jamalgota in ur mouth...result: this part 2...he he...

  9. @ste

    i second islex...tereko bahut train karenge re...strenous workout...tereko priyanka chopra ka figure nahi dilaaya toh asbah apna naam badal degi ste...he he..

  10. @islex

    thanks for what asbah...n will you stop calling me a guru...am a friend...nt a guru!! grrrrrrr....

    hope you liked the transformation n the watermelon sequence...n hope tht i did justice to your draft ;-)

    btw ur first attempt at humour is turning out to be a big hit asbah..way to go...way to go ;-)

  11. @Rohan

    hey...welcome to the lounge bro..he he he...hostel ka pehla din thaa naa yaar rashi kaa...kajal ke saamne shine karne ke liye arrange kiya hoga...jyaada din kahaan tikta hain yeh show off...blame asbah for the neat and tidy wardrobe ;-)

    glad that you liked the humour...there is a lot more left...keep coming back ;-)

  12. a lot more than just adding. I am already enjoying the limelight ;) lols!

    and u're a friend guru na...

  13. enjoy enjoy islex...n heard the monkey ran away to islamabad with the watermelon on ste's boxer...he he..catch him if you can...need to stitch it back to his boxer...it has a gaping hole in it ;-)

  14. wonderful.....entertainment ki dukan...its like 100%off!! anxiously waiting for the next episode!!

  15. woww!! totally entertaining!!
    bahut funny hai twin..great job guys...thumbs up for asbiii :)

    d watermelon thing ws just too gud!! poor steeeee!! hehe

    description of spider parivaar was really great!!
    bahut sahi tha ye to...daddy spider ...4th n 6th leg slipped..hehe...
    SWW and sappachino...lolll

    :D :D :D

  16. hehe.... What other fruits r left in ur boxers Stephy???? lolz..!!

    Kajal, are u ready to faint???

    It would have been gr8 if Kajal had a frock in her wardrobe... :P Ste would have looked gr8 with a pink frock and all the powder on his face.... :)

    This part was funny guys... asbah or sandeep.. ok..asbah and sandeep.. ;)

    Just a small opinion- I thought it would have been funnier if it was shorter... :)

    Anyways... enjoy the glory.. hehe


  17. @shruti

    ha ha..very wel put...entertainment ki dukaan...100% off...yup...offer only till stocks last..he he!

  18. @pri

    thnx twin...ur turn next...since the tension is off now n we have set up the platform for you to take off....let you imagination loose and go for the kill...cheers!

  19. @arjun

    there are bananas, guavas, mangoes n grapes left...choose your pick arjun...he he

    kajal has no clue what is in store for her when she opens her wardrobe...ste's first day in hostel will turn out to be his most memorable one ;-)

    n yaa...i do agree with the length of the story...but seriously cudnt help it....if i would have left it at the monkey bite, would have become too short. So had to add two more para's to set up the premise for the next episode. Plus, we had to concentrate on the transformation as well. The rest wont be as lengthy...

    stitch back the watermelon to ste's boxer roomie ;-)

  20. I'll kick him in the gap.. No question of stitching n all... He dint get up when i woke him up... hehe.. lolz..!!

    Priyanka, make him bunk the first class ya.. It'll be so easy for people to realise that u've written it.. hehe :P


  21. @arjun

    u more than welcome to...u r his roomie..u have the right to...

    yaa priyanka...make him bunk...i will take care of the rest..he he...

    ste...get ready for a great first day at your engg. college!!

  22. OMG... Me and a neat freak..Hehe! Me and croton..DOUBLE HEHE.. I sounded bulimic... But what the hell? My brother thinks I have lost my head... smiling away to glory like this!! :P

    Btw Rohan, HOW RUDE!!! Kitne mean ho! :P

  23. rashi's bro...rashi's bro...rashi is perfectly fine n sane...its just of some insane souls around like us that she is laughing like that...he he...

    u have seen the monkey with the watermelon in your locality by any chance?

  24. lol the comments are funny tooo...u rock brother......guru hehehe...

    ur indeed our guru Mr.Sandeep Balan and please dont refuse to accept it......u really rock man.....how do u think on diff spectrum woaaaaa.....hey and heard that monkey comes to mahindra park ......zara sambhal ke rahna mere bhaiiii

    suna hai ki u wear boxers with apple on it.....may be a chimpu will come instead of a monkey lol.........and yeah theres not even a girls hostel in ur locality.....damm funny bro.........

    pakka 100% entertainment ki dukan khuli hai yaar

  25. @ arjun

    yeah dude.....i shud have got up whe nu asked me to:-p

    see poor me ....i spoiled chirags sleep and a monkey bit my butt ...very bad naaa.....btw
    malan roamed marine drive without his trousers and u made a monkey bite stepMAN

    eagerly waiting for kajals reaction in next post

  26. hehe!! see rash ;)someone out here has the ability to transform the sane people into insanes !!


    I hectic day at work and reading the comments made my day in retrospective ;)

  27. arjun,
    hehe..yaa..bunk..as u wish fan!! ;)
    ste ki vaat lagati hu :D

  28. ste kii vaat laga tuu aur 2 point some one mei mein teri waat lagaungaaa hehehe ;-)

  29. nice one
    apane moje ya jute sunghata to ye danav jaruru uth jata

  30. "Out there daddy has just caught the heaviest of flies and was happy that he'll be able to feed the children for a week and he would enjoy the SWW (spider wide web) and would sip sappachino. But at that very moment, his 4th and 6th leg slipped, and before he could balance himself he stumbled, down down and way down. Nature has its way of deciding things and down he landed right on the tongue of Stephy’s open mouth."

    OMG how could someone ever imagine something like dis? [:p]
    he he great wrk sandeep n asbah :P


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