January 10, 2009

Rebel...

Rashi's post started with the guy saying -

"Stars, I want,
The moon, I want.
Rebel, I am,
The unthinkable, I want."


Here is my respone from the girl -

"i will be your star,
hope you see me shine..
I will be your moon,
filling you with light..
Rebel am not,but will be,
if i dont get YOU in my life!!

11 comments:

  1. Read that, read this too .. and I was ready with my comment, and the REBEL inside me told me that I should post it separately ... check my above post ... The Rebel talked there ...

    Consider the above as a mere comment on your post!!

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  2. o wow it was a good reply...pretty changed the whole meaning..she has answered the previous poem in a good way..
    seems like someone was willing to love the rebel just that she didn't hold courage to express!!

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  3. While Rashi was straight... ur reply was more the 'sweet' kind...
    Loved both though...

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  4. Wah! I feel honoured to have received this as the continuation.. You do understand me well.. Im just a little overwhelmed... You end up saying things I imply but cant say in so many words :)

    But for love,I wont fight. Rebel I wont be!

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  5. @Tan,,, awesome reply dude... though i havent read it .. for me, the best reply is when some one can extend it ... :)

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  6. @Navin : I guess thats your name,thanks for the read and the comment ... i love to imagine different angle to a situation ... love to see some good response :D

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  7. ahh now diff persp from the girl haan
    written by a diff girl....

    offcourse rash ...u must realy be honoured ....gonna read the rebels reply

    and pls check the kiss post written few months ago

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  8. you see Arjun, M so sweet to my heroines ,,,, ;) !! well m not really happy to them,,, i do write a lot of sad verses,... but this one time, i wanted to write a rightful one :D

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  9. M glad you liked my atempt Raash !! thanksie Ste for the ever nice support :)

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