January 13, 2009

I LOVE YOU

I LOVE YOU; it’s not a weight you must carry around.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not a box that holds you in.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not a standard you must bear.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not a sacrifice I make.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not a pedestal you are frozen upon.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not an expectation of perfection.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not my life’s whole purpose (or yours).
I LOVE YOU; it’s not to make you change.
I LOVE YOU; it’s not even to make you love me.
I LOVE YOU; it’s as pure and simple as that...!!!!

Falak pe baadlon ke beech kuch aisi hui saazish,
Mera tha ghar mitti ka; aur mere hi ghar hui baarish,
Unki bhi zid hai bijliyaan girne ki,
Meri bhi zid hai wahi aashiyana banane ki...!!!!!

P.S. Well everyone was talking about love... so I thought of contributing...this is my very simple definition of love...though I believe it’s a feeling which always falls short of words...but I still made an attempt.

14 comments:

  1. I LOVE YOU; it’s as pure and simple as that...!!!!



    i recently said this to one of my best friend (in a friendly way only ;) ) and trust me.. it was too good to say that :)

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  2. Yeah Pretty,

    love isnt only romantic. It is so much more.

    Love cant be defined. We know what it isnt. We dont what it is. Bcas it simple, it is complex. We are incapable of understanding simplicity. We are incapable of understand something limitless, boundary-less like love. We seek meaning in the meaningless. We seek to understand something that isnt meant to be understood. We can only feel love, give love and receive love. Nothing more. Nothing less!

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  3. nice one...like the simplicity with which it was written!

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  4. I love u too :)

    And I dont know Hindi :( It was good.

    Cheers
    Randeep

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  5. @Tweety: comeon girl! you rock! big time! some beautiful of description out there..
    though i hv heard that urdu sher but still its quite relevant here..
    am glad that you added it here,,,beautified the post all the more
    and yup Love is in the air or should love is in the Lounge in its Full Form :D

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  6. @prats

    love is simple and the same time very complicated...if someone understands your love in simple words then one should be grateful for it...

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  7. greta rashi yes...we "We can only feel love, give love and receive love. Nothing more. Nothing less!" i dnt thnk it could be bettr described

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  8. @naveen

    thanks a lot...i wanted to maintain the simplicity....

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  9. @kajal

    most of the times urs and rashi's comments usually leave me with nothing to reply to...rashi with her philosophy and u with ur flaterring...nywys thanks a lot gal...yes, its an sms sher and irony i got it just while i was writing the post...so thought of inculcating in it here...

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  10. @kajal

    yes today most of the posts were on love and dear u started the legacy....

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  11. @Tweety: i would love to make you talk... :) so no more flattery now :P
    and "i started the legacy"
    :P:P tell me tell me who is flattering now.. ah ah? :P

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  12. many of us use 'i love you'very often...but no one actually realises waht it truly means

    I LOVE YOU; it’s not even to make you love me.
    I LOVE YOU; it’s as pure and simple as that...!!!!

    that explains evrything.

    gr8 post!

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