Life’s changing, I am changing
Why I am changing? I don’t know
They say be yourself, but I can’t see them doing the same
Their closeones are changing, they are changing
Why they are changing? I don’t know
My friends laugh at me; they say I am a fool
I feel sad, I feel bad
Am I a fool? I don’t know
I see her she sees me, we walk together but
She’s quite, I am quite
Why are we quite? I don’t know
In my dreams I see her smiling to me
Her shining eyes, her beautiful voice
Am I in love? I don’t know
May be she is not for me or she won’t accept me
But does that makes any difference?
May be yes, may be no
Am I afraid? I don’t know
at times the beauty of life lies in not knowing.. if you knew everything already (the questions that you've asked here) you wouldnt hv come out with this poetry..
ReplyDeleteif you knew it all,
ReplyDeletethen what words would be left?
if no questions were there,
no answers would be left!
sorry, weird rhyme i know... life ain't always abt knowing everything... sometimes u need to question life itself...!
and like orchid says, if u knew it all, u wouldn't have written this poem! and beautifully written it was too! :)
Nice Naveen.... :) Had commented on this on ur blog as well.. Thanks for posting it here...
ReplyDeleteAnd hey - "She’s quite, I am quite
Why are we quite? I don’t know
"
here do u mean- QUIET ??
hehe.. With so many poems here on Wl, I'm loving it... Just that I cant express how good each one is.. :)
Keep Posting Naveen..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
Knowing is nice,
ReplyDeleteNot knowing is better,
Knowing means for sure
You are mine or you aren't.
Not knowing is, In my head
You are mine, all mine.
I am coming up with the weirdest poems as comments ..MUST MUST STOP!!
I like the confusion that comes along with the love. Yes or no? Fast heart beats. Name on the phone. Calling. What is he going to say? Yes or No. Crush or love? Or nothing at all!
This left a smile on my face on remembering the things I felt. I want to open my diary and read those parts when I was still in love, new love!
thanx all of you for posting such lovely comments
ReplyDeleteur poems r cute naveen
ReplyDeletenice rhymes at the end.
nice description of the confusion.
not knowing is a bliss though.
keep it up!
well i liked it
ReplyDeletemay be u dont knw and u have to knw it soon...so go and tell her