January 16, 2009

Broken...

Inspired by the broken glass series , i wrote this :



When you left,
breaking my heart..
the tiny pieces
lining the path..
I could still see
the tears you shed..
from my broken heart
how your hands bled..
Love was still there
wonder why you ignored..
If you really wanted,
why did you not move on..
I can not stand here
to see both of us in pain..
let the glass hurt me,
i'll walk to u,if love i gain..

9 comments:

  1. Am rilly impressed Prats! Excellent rhyme-scheme and well expressed emotions! Good one! :)

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  2. hello... this has become a widespread series... nice version prats...! :)

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  3. @Prats:
    let the glass hurt me
    i'll walk to you, if love i gain...

    i am all sighs right now..:)

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  4. nice poem pretty....u r really good with poems

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  5. tell u the truth... i too loved those lines ,,, :)

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