Friend, if your heart is shattered,
Like glass that is broken so much,
I shall find every one little piece,
And join them like olden such.
I know it may not be the same,
But I’ll nurse that heart to health,
Make sure it gets, a rain of smiles,
Shower laughs and loving wealth.
If your heart is now, a withered rose,
I’ll find those petals which now are dry,
Give that heart, a heart my own,
A shoulder on which it can now cry.
I will listen to its pain, catch every tear,
Make it forget those memories of yore,
I will be by its side, till it becomes better,
A loving heart, that all can again adore.
Broken glass may not be beautiful again,
But a heart can forget, memories that pain,
A loving hand to hold when it is down,
A few words can make smiles from frown.
A broken heart may not be the same again,
But a heart is not always like glass my friend,
It can be better, than what it was before,
When it has more love that knows how to mend.
A reply to Tweety's post here . It's just a try, not sure if it has come out that well.
awwwwww vinay...i actually have tears in my eyes right nw...and u say its not that gud....vinay one more time u criticiize ur poems n i ll not talk to u agn...u couldnt mend that broken heart bettr...love u fr this....
ReplyDeletethanks tweety...! :)
ReplyDeleteand nooo... dont do that... i wont criticize again... pakka! :)
read hers read urs
ReplyDeleteu r on a spree of making everyone here in the lounge happy isn't it..? god bless u for that
nobody could have given a better reply..that too poetically
hope tweety's heart and glass i smended with ur attempt leo
@aparna...
ReplyDeletelounge is my second home...
i like a happy home, so i do my best...! :)
@Vinay: kya baat hai!!
ReplyDeleteThat's a real nice one leo....Two poems in one day ....Good going mann ....
ReplyDeletethanks kajal! :)
ReplyDeletethanks anurag! :)
ReplyDeletegood going !!! :)
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