Sorry friends...Have been missing from the action since past few weeks. Thanks for all those who made me the member of the month for August. And a bigger thanks for showing faith in me this month as well. I bring to you another short story from my stable, "The Gift of Life", which i hope will be able to capture your imaginations this month. Am posting the first installment of this baby of mine. Cheers!!
“Meera, you are getting late for the flag hoisting ceremony at your school dear. It’s already 8:20 molu. The white uniform that you are wearing is just fine. No need to keep on looking at that small spot on the collar again and again. It won’t vanish by itself daa! Its hardly noticeable molu. Be quick! Ohhhhh…you still haven’t had your breakfast!! Come here this instant.”
I could hear my mom shouting from the dining room. How on earth did Amma know that I was glancing at the spot standing in front of the mirror here? “Mothers are mothers. The supreme beings. They know it all. Their sixth sense antennas are always turned on”, said a feeble voice within me.
Being Meera Krishnan was tough at times. After all why don’t these grown up’s understand that a 10 year old girl has better things to do than have breakfast. I consider breakfast a sheer waste of time. I could have slept a little more or had a longer look at the calendar to anticipate and plan my approaching birthday the next day, January the 27th. I wanted to simply stand there dreaming of the gift dad promised me this time around.
Another routine call by mom had me rushing towards the dining table. I glanced at the clock and wondered how mom managed to give me a call in exact 5 minute intervals from the moment I got up from bed to this instant. I threw my bag on the sofa and took my seat on the dining table. The seat at the centre of this dining table belongs to me, Miss Meera Krishnan. Though I dislike spending time munching stuffs made lovingly by mom, which I consider a sheer waste of time, but I do enjoy being made the centre of attention. Dad enquiring about my day and mom asking me if I would like another helping, my seat at the centre enabled me to have a clear view of both and bask in the attention being showered.
I made a dash towards the casserole and peeped into it. I closed it the very instant and threw an angry glance at mom. “Idli’s again??? Yuck….Amma, this is not fair! You keep doing this all the time. You promised to make me sandwiches for breakfast last night. I don’t want to take this to school. Kids have labelled me a South Indian ponytail because my tiffin always is stuffed with either idli’s or dosa’s. Stephen Gonzales of our section keeps bringing fancy items in his tiffin everyday. It’s a new thing everyday. Or take Asbah Alaena of Section B. She brings along sandwiches with a different filling every day. She has made so many friends in my section just because she is so cool. Mona Aiyar, Ani, Rajesh, Ttushar…ohhh…the list of the cool people in my section is endless mom. It’s only me with these idli’s and dosa’s. Yaa, there is this Sandeep Balan who brings the same stuff. But that’s precisely the reason no one hangs out with him. Students make fun of him and call him “Dosa boy”. At least I have some friends with whom I hang around. I don’t want to be like that boy and labelled as a “South Indian” mom. It’s not that cool when I have to give explanations that it’s not Parachute coconut oil that we use for cooking. I am tired of telling them that this is the costliest and purest oil around and not the cheap ones which are used for hair. It was just the other day that Mona Aiyar was making fun of me. She said that your mom applies the oil that remains after cooking in your hair. How embarrassing is that? I want to take sandwiches along to show them that we don’t cook in coconut oil mom. Why don’t you understand?” I looked up at mom and she didn’t even show a sign of registering my complaint. If I meet God one day, the first thing I would like to ask him is that why are 10 year olds treated so miserably by heir mothers. I swallowed two idli’s making faces and slipped the tiffin into my bag. I had school for only 3 hours today. Today being the republic day, we had a flag hoisting ceremony in school followed by some sports. I was looking forward to the 100 m dash in my age category where I was among the favourites. As soon as mom ordered me to stop and head towards the school bus which seemed to have arrived below, I jumped out of my chair. I could feel a feeling of triumph within me. I think this is how prisoners feel when they are set free after being behind the bars for years. It is so liberating. I made a dash towards the lift on our floor.
To be continued....
**Waiting for the next part**
ReplyDeleteWas fun...so the Dosa boy has scripted a funny first episode...lollzz...was really nice captured...u captured the emotions of a south indian school-goer to perfection....enjoyed it loads...but i felt the coconut oil stuff looked a hyperbole...but I may be wrong too..
**Waiting for the next part**
hey...thanx yaar..i think coming from chennai you could relate to the south indian school goer...he he...coconut oil stuff is something which i have come across without fail in every state i have been bro...and given that i have been a nomad throughout my school days, the coconut oil tease is quite close to my heart....things are to take a dramatic turn bro...watch on!
ReplyDeletesouth indian stuff
ReplyDeletei dont think that those coconut oil n thing relates to any south indian thing lol
as far i know+,being a tamilian i dont feel so...may be old orthodox tamils used to....lol
and yeah i am sick of this so called idli thing ,so stephen doesnt brings fancy tiffin...lol may be asbah does ...
mira poor girl lol...
am looking forw+ard for next parts
hope u wo+nt disappoint us by once again w+riting a dark story w+ith sad ending hehe
ohh..ste bhai...welcome to the comments bhoomi..he he...yaar..the coconut thing is a very much mallu thing...its coz we use coconut oil in cooking makes a lot of north indians comment on the same...i still am poked on for it...thats what...
ReplyDeleteand the dark end....he he...i hope not this time around...dont know how my fingers and mind veer off towards that whenever i write a random story bro...he he...will try my best..but yaa..no guarantees...
oyi wht no guarantee
ReplyDeleteu have to make this one happy atleast...i mean a happy finish.....included every one haan
yeah some dumbos cant differentiate btw mallus and tamils nd so they confused wi+th this thing....
man mallus r used to nariyal thing naa....my bloody frnds tease me nariyal vala....hehehe
very funny
and welcome dude
ohhh...nariyal wala is a cool nick for you bro...ha ha ha...and yaa...coolin my heels at home yaar...the connection here is damn slow...but still fighting...and thanx for the onam wishes bro...its on sept. 14th....and thanks for that great welcome nariyal waale! he he he
ReplyDeletehe he he...okay...ur wish..my command ste "naariyal waala". I will try my level best to refrain my dark side from springing up. Its a touch difficult given the plot i have formed in my head for this story. But will ensure minimum casualties okay...ha ha...guarantee bro!
ReplyDeleteand me and me and me???????
ReplyDeleteOMY GOD you're online??
ReplyDeleteanyway the story is cool. I have absolutely no idea about coconut oil thing and the two dishes you tell about
ReplyDelete*will wikipedia soon*
so lets see!
woaa lets see man
ReplyDeleteyeah done...and when r u back in mumbai....oye dude....dont spoil my image in this story of urs like i did it in my story sandeep and richa lol
btw how is richa babhi
say my hi to her;)
Ok the story is once again good :) i tell you you're a narration Guru :) i will wait for more parts too... and i hope you come back soon, and hope you have had an awesome day ?
ReplyDeletewo+aa asbah
ReplyDeletey dont u ask any south indian frnd of urs ;)
y wickipedia
NO no ste, tit for tat *winks*
ReplyDeletehey!!!
ReplyDeleteAsbah!!! Islexxxxx......Wow!!! ohhhh man.....so good to see you here! And a pity i cant come online to talk coz am using a damn slow connection which takes ages to load. Ha ha...i love the way u use those starred lines to perfection...do "wiki" for those two dishes...you are being deprived of some great south indian breakfast stuff...i tel you....and the story has just started yaar...it takes off a dramatic turn...he he...ste is forcing me to mellow down..i already have a plot in my head :-(
han han? why not? recipes anyone?
ReplyDeleteas Nin says, my sin is gluttony too :)
ha ha...no man...no character biopsies will be carried out by me for sure...to be very frank you are there only in this part...this story is all about Meera. And Alaena who will be introduced in the next part....ha ha...Asbah..i take the second part of your name to give you a role you would never have dreamt of! And Ste..you have to wait for your character biopsy...one is due from my side for sure...it will happen soon..
ReplyDeleteno no do as you plan to :) i will wait!
ReplyDeleteand yes we missed you :)
Ste...i will be back on Saturday...20th.....uske baad tereko call karoonga...till that time have to manage wid this slow net connection of mine...hope you are enjoyin my absence from gtalk! he he..
ReplyDelete*jaws drop down to floor* (rem jum Carry in Mask?)
ReplyDelete*gulp* me waits
Islex....Asbah..I missed you all..and missed scribbing too...dont even ask yaar...was a hell of a month...and guess what...i am home in kerala for a whole 2 weeks...a breather...am here to celebrate our main festival..."Onam"...wiki that...its the only festival which is irrespective of caste n creed...all mallu's celebrate it...be it hindu or muslim or christian...
ReplyDelete@asbah..
ReplyDeletehe he..nothing of tht jaw dropping sorts...you will luv this new role for sure...its a cute lil role..but an important one nevertheless...and thanx for tht "narration guru" tag...coming from the literature queen, it packs in a lot of punch and weight! he he...
Ste..share teh dosa n idli recipe's with islex...and y is there no post from ur side asbah...atleast plant that onion one here for the time being...let the newbies see the stuff "asbah the great" is capable of..and the kind of writers this lounge has...
@ Ste
ReplyDeleteAbhe kaun richa bhabhi...kahaan ki richa bhabhi!! man....you wait...once this meera story is done..next one is a peep into india's footpaths and the love story on the other side of civilization...u are the hero...
And its great to have all three of the founder members of this lounge together at this moment...a minute of silence for the destruction caused...he he he!!
@rajesh
ReplyDeleteThe coconut oil thing is very much a part of mallu lifestyle bro...and this is a mallu family i am referring to....not tamilians...so the coconut oil thing zeroes down to the mallu factor which is a subset of south indians..he he...i have been teased numerous times for this coconut oil in food part...so that mention in the story...cheers!
hmm man ...peep into india's footpath and me hero...
ReplyDeletew+aah kya baat hai
am waiting for it ...then i wi+ll make 1 for u
u know wht
few days ago i told asbah kii tere ghar mein teri shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai and tu isliye village gaya hai
she did believe this
i told her ki babhi is gorgeous and beautiful hehehe
voh bhi maan lii asbah nee
let me return bro...let me get back...asbahhhhhhhhh.......how cum u believe such silly things that ste cooks up!! uffff!! Tu ruk beta...tereko superhero banaana hi padega lagta hain!! he he....
ReplyDeleteAnd islex..dont u believe a word that ste has to say.....my marriage...my foot!! Am a kid for that!
i so planned to do a post, but everytime i am ready with it i feel no no may be not this one :p
ReplyDeleteand believe you me i wanted to do onion here... but then! anwyays i will post something cool soon ;)
ste you owe me the recipies
ReplyDeletethankyou sandeep, you're indeed Generous :) i hope you trip be so cool and you bring us with loads of pictures. slow connections is fine till you are with the things/places and people you love :)
ReplyDeleteand of course, I will wait for the story ...
*my laughs jumps outta me, run to the roof, burst out, echo in the vicinity and the neighbors would come asking if someone has hysteria!*
ReplyDeleteLOL.... oh no!!!!!!!!!!!
1) yesternight something wild happen because i was only and i COULDNT open this site.. belieme! i am sure sandeep jinxed :p otherwise i would have stayed here longer...
2) oh man! i thought you guys are in tough.. I thought you serious were off for... you know, wedding business :p
3) and when he said she;s pretty i gotta believe it err!!!!!
and you know what else he said man!! he said he's goina attend that too, thoda sa shuk huwa tha muje per i though, who knows, how lucky ,,,, err
and as far as story writing concern, isi leye kehtay hain writers say dushmani buri *winks*
ReplyDeletehiiii ghonchuuu...non members can finally post comments!
ReplyDeletewas goin thru dis blog n read some of mona's poems...n liked dem sooo much...wanted to comment..fir yaad aya dat i cudn't..not being a member here..but still tried aise hi...n bingo..ho gya!
n den i thot..chalo aapko bhi hi hello bol dia jaye... ;)
aapki iss story ke liye aapke blog pe comment kar diya..
hmm sandeep ur loyal reader haan
ReplyDeletebut mona aiyar loves idlis.. n coconut oil too... !!! ( she's a pakka south indian...)
ReplyDeletevery nice story sandeep.. well narrated... n yeah..... d coconut oil thing has happened to me.. realy.. but i never got pissed... m proud of coconut oil...!!! lol .. eagerly waitin for d next part... keep writin.. cheers!!
he he he....cheers! Coconut oil zindabad. Firstly am sorry to hav used ur name without permission. I hope u wud gladly give it to me. N gr8 to meet the pakka south indian...thanx 4 da comments daa...rombam encouraging daa...
ReplyDeleteneither did i ever get pissed off 4 da coconut oil thing...enjoy it n proud of my roots...hail nariyal
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