June 25, 2011

How Does It Feels?


How does it feel,
to see me crying,
for you?
to see me annihilating myself,
in your love?


How does it feel,
to leave me behind,
all alone in agony ?
to shower love on someone else,
that was meant for me !

 
How does it feel,
to humiliate my soul,
shatter my love for you,
and never love me!


How does it feel,
to be a heart ripper,
and cast away with my heart beats!


How does it feel,                          
to see me broken,
by your egoistic allegations !


How does it feel,
to hurt me,
sucking joy out of my life.

How does it feel,           
tell me !
It must feel awesome,
I guess,
that's why
you do that all,
ruthlessly,
but still
so lovingly !

Smita
http://smitasdesk.blogspot.com/ 

6 comments:

  1. Very emotional poetry. If this is NOT a breakup poetry, then I give you extra marks...because such intensity mostly comes out of huge emotional turmoils...

    I like it...

    Scribblers Inc.

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  2. yeah, it's not an outcome of a breakup :p
    appreciate the extra marks :D
    THANKS :)

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  3. It feels like something is splintering your heart every moment .. endearing lines :)

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  4. It feels like something is splintering your heart every moment.. endearing lines :)

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  5. Lamentations.. they have no place in life or love.Dont you know that it is as easy to fall out of love as it is to fall in to it?

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  6. @kalyani : something is and that is called Love ! ;)
    Thanks for the comment :)

    @Dr.Antony : Yes, I do understand that now. How easy it was for me to fall in love and easy it was for him to fall out of love !! :)
    Thanks for the comment :)

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