How does it feel,
to see me crying,
for you?
to see me annihilating myself,
in your love?
How does it feel,
to leave me behind,all alone in agony ?
to shower love on someone else,
that was meant for me !
How does it feel,
to humiliate my soul,
shatter my love for you,
and never love me!
How does it feel,
to be a heart ripper,
and cast away with my heart beats!
How does it feel,
to see me broken,
by your egoistic allegations !
How does it feel,
to hurt me,
sucking joy out of my life.
How does it feel,
tell me !
It must feel awesome,
I guess,
that's why
you do that all,
ruthlessly,
but still
so lovingly !
Smita
http://smitasdesk.blogspot.com/
Very emotional poetry. If this is NOT a breakup poetry, then I give you extra marks...because such intensity mostly comes out of huge emotional turmoils...
ReplyDeleteI like it...
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yeah, it's not an outcome of a breakup :p
ReplyDeleteappreciate the extra marks :D
THANKS :)
It feels like something is splintering your heart every moment .. endearing lines :)
ReplyDeleteIt feels like something is splintering your heart every moment.. endearing lines :)
ReplyDeleteLamentations.. they have no place in life or love.Dont you know that it is as easy to fall out of love as it is to fall in to it?
ReplyDelete@kalyani : something is and that is called Love ! ;)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment :)
@Dr.Antony : Yes, I do understand that now. How easy it was for me to fall in love and easy it was for him to fall out of love !! :)
Thanks for the comment :)