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Your writting could change the world that you want. Express your thoughts!!. Politics , Business , Entertainment , Sports & Games , Life & Events ,and Health what else?. Meet your like minded here. The top social gathering in one place all the top notches meet here. It is not about win the race, participation is all matters. We proud inviting you to the the internet's best Social community. www.jeejix.com .
I think this began well, until broken strings, when I think for the sake of rhyming sense went a little awry. On the whole a very thought-provoking piece though.
Extremely beautiful !! Simple awesome ! :)Well , in my opinion , its perfect , as in fact , from 5th line , the poem reflects deeper meaning and maybe thats why , you are still clinging to the musical thoughts ! :)
Thanks adreamygirl. Yes, almost all the lines have flipsides, deeper meanings concealed by the apparence of disconnected inanity. You sailed throught the mists and found out the hidden island. :)
Your writting could change the world that you want. Express your thoughts!!. Politics , Business , Entertainment , Sports & Games , Life & Events ,and Health what else?. Meet your like minded here. The top social gathering in one place all the top notches meet here. It is not about win the race, participation is all matters. We proud inviting you to the the internet's best Social community. www.jeejix.com .
ReplyDeleteYour writting could change the world that you want. Express your thoughts!!. Politics , Business , Entertainment , Sports & Games , Life & Events ,and Health what else?. Meet your like minded here. The top social gathering in one place all the top notches meet here. It is not about win the race, participation is all matters. We proud inviting you to the the internet's best Social community. www.jeejix.com .
ReplyDeleteI think this began well, until broken strings, when I think for the sake of rhyming sense went a little awry. On the whole a very thought-provoking piece though.
ReplyDeleteYes, Sakhi, I agree wit you. But, I guess, the inconsistency however is an important aspect of the poem. :)
ReplyDeleteExtremely beautiful !! Simple awesome ! :)Well , in my opinion , its perfect , as in fact , from 5th line , the poem reflects deeper meaning and maybe thats why , you are still clinging to the musical thoughts ! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks adreamygirl. Yes, almost all the lines have flipsides, deeper meanings concealed by the apparence of disconnected inanity. You sailed throught the mists and found out the hidden island. :)
ReplyDeleteAh thats because I live in dreams :P and I am used to seeing things beyond the smoke-y words :)
ReplyDeleteAhh! Then, I must acknowledge that you've got eyes of an eagle. :P
ReplyDeleteHahahhaa...no not really :P Your words just opened my doors of thoughts :)
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