January 12, 2010

Twisted Care II

continued from FL post

He turned white in a while.She touched his bleeding heart and laid her head on his frozen chest.Tears spilled out of her eyes and her colds lips whispered,'I loved you,Dad'.
Eyes still staring at the dagger,she took out the phone and dialed,'Cop,I killed my dad'.

4 comments:

  1. WHY THE HELL???
    Well, there's lot behind it, I know...

    Now tell me the truth, did you not remove two 'the' from the last line?? I guess you did... but, let me know :)

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  2. @Tan...I did not remove but I did 4gt..thnks

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