November 11, 2009

Even if I let you go


I just want to ask thee
Before you leave me
In all these years we were together,
Did you love me, ever?

It was all clear on your face
You changed a lot these days
Fool of me, that I didn’t see you go away.
My life is at bay!

I knew girls don’t have a heart
I thought you to be poles apart
I fell prey to the dreams you showed,
To the solemn words you vowed.

Love, I know a lot about
But, I still have a little doubt
Is it fate that has parted us, or you?
It is hard to trust, but true!

There was so much in you
I always felt the bliss as new
As you leave me in the world of sorrow,
For a better tomorrow!

Even if I let you go
My love, I just want to know
Were all the words you said just fake?
For God’s sake!







7 comments:

  1. Oh, Tan, how could you let her go if you love her?

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  2. Nice question...

    Who's that 'you', btw?? :P

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  3. Its not about letting go, it wasn't in his hands may be, . . .very touching poem.

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  4. Sad but beautiful poem Tan. Its always a pleasure to read ur posts. Maybe its fiction..but never let go..never give up on love. I believe in that.

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  5. Thanks people :)

    Hmmm... some people said that they did not like this poem... well, I did not like this too...

    I dont know what the narrator is going through but I wish him all the luck!!

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