November 11, 2009

Even if I let you go

I just want to ask thee
Before you leave me
In all these years we were together,
Did you love me, ever?

It was all clear on your face
You changed a lot these days
Fool of me, that I didn’t see you go away.
My life is at bay!

I knew girls don’t have a heart
I thought you to be poles apart
I fell prey to the dreams you showed,
To the solemn words you vowed.

Love, I know a lot about
But, I still have a little doubt
Is it fate that has parted us, or you?
It is hard to trust, but true!

There was so much in you
I always felt the bliss as new
As you leave me in the world of sorrow,
For a better tomorrow!

Even if I let you go
My love, I just want to know
Were all the words you said just fake?
For God’s sake!


  1. Oh, Tan, how could you let her go if you love her?

  2. Nice question...

    Who's that 'you', btw?? :P

  3. Its not about letting go, it wasn't in his hands may be, . . .very touching poem.

  4. Sad but beautiful poem Tan. Its always a pleasure to read ur posts. Maybe its fiction..but never let go..never give up on love. I believe in that.

  5. Thanks people :)

    Hmmm... some people said that they did not like this poem... well, I did not like this too...

    I dont know what the narrator is going through but I wish him all the luck!!


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