October 13, 2009

LINEN MOMENTS


Love how
It feels
Neatly washed
Evenly pressed
Nicely tucked.


Makes me relax
On its top
Makes me comfortable
Entwined so adorable
Now and every
Time I will
Slumber so fine.


P.S. This acrostic of mine should have been posted at Amias', but when I went over the rules, it't not really an acrostic but any style of poem of which the title is "LINEN MOMENTS". So in order not to waste my effort of writing it, I am posting it here...Anyway, I made another one for Amias.

17 comments:

  1. heyy..vry well written..gudd 1..seems acro is in the air fr u..:) nice..!!!

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  2. Mads dear,

    thank you so much...

    yah, i'm happy doing acrostics...

    great day ahead!:)

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  3. Hi Shrads,

    Amias' rule was any poem about linen moments, free style but not an acrostic form...but then i was through writing it, so i just posted it here...

    i just wrote another one and maybe i will post it today for Amias" Acrostic Only...

    thanks to you...:)

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  4. Hi Shrads,

    Amias' rule was any poem about linen moments, free style but not an acrostic form...but then i was through writing it, so i just posted it here...

    i just wrote another one and maybe i will post it today for Amias" Acrostic Only...

    thanks to you...:)

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  5. Amity,

    Amias meant free style of acrostic I think dear, without some rules she mentioned for other poems..

    It is nice!! Lovely linen moments! I'm linking this to AO Hub.. It needs to be considered I feel!! :)

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  6. thanks Leo for linking it, and i am most honored...

    but i have another, yet something wrong with my template and i can no longer make new posts...

    will somebody help me?

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  7. ha ha ha...

    thanks Princess for letting you reduce to sleep upon reading my post...

    :)

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  8. hope you had DREAMLESS SLEEP.. :)
    *Peace*

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  9. Very cute, Amity. I especially like your last line, 'slumber so fine.' That is a nice sleep!
    You sure did find a nice picture that goes well with these words.
    ..

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  10. Meow?

    ha ha ha...sleeping in clean sheets with very nice smell is dream enough i guess...:)

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  11. This is a wonderful acrostic Amity Me ... I can relate to these feeling. Very well written!

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  12. Hello Amias,

    what can i say, but thank you from the bottom of my heart...

    and of course thank you for "Acrostic Only" because it's helpin' me a lot to develop my craft...

    and i hope i am really improvin' here...

    :)

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  13. Hi Jim:

    ...well, thank you so much for recognizing this piece of work of mine...

    ...i also have a lot posted in my own site...do care to visit it when you have time...

    nice day Jim!:)

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