“When we die, we become stars. Forever shining and up there for people we love most”, told Ammalu to her 5 year old girl.
“But Amma, you won’t even be able to see or hear me from far up there”, Kinginni frowned.
“Molu, you were named Kinginni which in our native tongue means the anklet. The sound of these anklets will inform me. There is always an invisible umbilical cord that connects a mother with her daughter, no matter how far she is”, Ammalu tried reassuring her daughter, wiping away tears which she had so valiantly fought for the past few months.
This conversation was still fresh in Kinginni’s mind though it had taken place two years back. Ammalu had passed away that very year, leaving Kinginni with her maternal grandmother and fisherman brother Velan. For the last two years, like a ritual Kinginni would head to the rocky beach towards the other end of her adopted home on every birthday of hers and converse with the brightest star closest to the moon. The sound made by her anklets would echo all around announcing her arrival. She would open her heart out to this twinkling star and share every single thing that had happened in the last one year. And the star would shine brightly while Kinginni smiled, fade out when she cried, twinkle at her complaints and bathe Kinginni in the cool moonlight when she would yearn for her mothers touch.
Today was her birthday. But things had gone terribly wrong. Kinginni had lost her anklets two days back while playing near the beach. She had spent the last two days crying. The new white frock her uncle gifted her this morning had failed to cheer her up. It had been raining heavily for the past few days and today was no different. As soon as it stopped raining towards the night, Kinginni made a dash to her spot. There was an eerie silence all around and the place sounded unfamiliar today without the echoes of her anklet. With a heavy heart, she glanced towards the sky. She let out a gasp on seeing the sky without a single star. Tears swelled up in her eyes and she rushed back unable to handle the shock.
Kinginni ran along the beach with the stream of tears gushing down her cheeks. She felt something prick her legs which made her stop. She had almost dismissed it as a thorn. But the shine of that object made her dig the surface of the sand only to reveal her anklets. Kinginni could not believe it. She thanked the sea for this gift on her birthday and rushed back to the spot, the anklet adorning her leg. The place echoed in rhythm to her pace as she sprinted to the corner. With a smile on her lips, she looked towards the sky in anticipation. And like God’s play, a strong wind blew the black clouds above revealing a bright twinkling star besides the moon.
Word count: 500
P.S.: Sorry for the late entry friends. The Onam celebrations back home in Kerala had kept me hooked. How could i not participate in a contest held by the beloved lounge? :-) The founders are always counted in by default...aren't they? Hope you all like the attempt. Keep rocking :P
This is the best I've read so far in the contest. Hats off!
ReplyDeletewowwwwww....tht comment made my day, my week...my month...my year :-)
ReplyDeleteThnx daa...the rusty rusty feeling i had while writing the story has disappeared now...*puts the hat back on n bows :P*
wow...A story of hope...Beautiful ending...Why can't I write like this :( ..Balan sir..hats off :)
ReplyDeleteJust one word for you and thats....AWESOME!!!
ReplyDeletethis is really the best posted for the contest
@anurag sir :P
ReplyDeleteU write super fab sir....the admiration is mutual...glad tht u liked my attempt...cheers!
@pooja
ReplyDeleteHumbled....honoured....speechless...*does a jig and bows :P*
Glad tht u luvd kinginni...have no words to convey my happiness...yeyyyyy!!! :P
@pooja
ReplyDeleteHumbled....honoured....speechless...*does a jig and bows :P*
Glad tht u luvd kinginni...have no words to convey my happiness...yeyyyyy!!! :P
Hey Bhai,
ReplyDeleteFinally Sandeep Balan is back with a bang!!!!!
Now that is what I call an AWESOME POST! :)
You know what... though you miss out on all of us for months together... your comebacks of such sorts... everything changes after your post... its all new, fresh! :) :)
As for this post... its beautiful... innocent, emotional, touching! :)
Perfect WINNING MATeRIAL! :)
a beautiful post of love! i'd rate it tops! it'll be very difficult to beat! :)
ReplyDeletebest one....!!!...loved it soooo mch..
ReplyDeleteWell I second the opinion that for the contest, this post was the best.
ReplyDeleteI found it apt as the whole plot n d central character perfectly matched with the picture. The pic shows a young girl & most of the stories n poems depict adult girls.
The story is also touching.
Cheers!
very very nicely written , the making of a future writer ... or are you one already?
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