July 2, 2009

wandering thoughts.!!


Bahut socha,Bahut socha
Aur phir shayad jana
yahi zindagi hai
har mord par ek ajnabi khada hai
kuch pal saath chalta hai
aisa lagta hai jaise hazaron sapne

aakar aanchal main simat gaye ho
Aur phir
ek tuffan aata hai

hawa ke tej zhokein aankhon ko band kar dete hai
aur jab ankhein khulti hai
to ek naye mord par zindagi aa jati hai
Ajnabi sa mord

bar-bar palat kar aankhein kisi ko dhoonti hai
aur door tak kahin koi nazar nahi aata

woh ajnabi bhi nahi.
uski yaad uska ehsaas jaane kitni bar palkein bhigo deta hai
Jab mila tha to ajnabi tha
jab zindagi ban jata hai to bhichard jata hai
kitna pyaara hota hai uska ehsaas
phir kyon cheen leta hai uska ehsaas koi
kyon???

7 comments:

  1. Vidisha, after long am reading some original stuff in Hindi. Thanks for sharing.

    Liked the lines, but I guess you have tried to dope it with sorrow, but it cannot be felt somehow.

    I guess you've posted your first draft.

    Whatsoever, good work.

    FABULOUS FRIDAY :)

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  2. oh wow...hindi mujhshe kabhi nahi hota...so whoever posts in hindi....i always like it...good job gal

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  3. awesome hindi poetry Vidhisha. loved it.

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  4. @Goswami- thnks..dis isn't my frst drfts..thy were just random thots..!!..pen down dirctly as dey wandered my mind..may be u hvn't felt tht sorrow...but k i vl try to write smthing vry touchng in hindi..;)

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  5. @FL..kaise nahi hota try to karo..

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  6. nice poem vidisha

    "Jab mila tha to ajnabi tha
    jab zindagi ban jata hai to bhichard jata hai"

    like this line much

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