July 22, 2009

Tears



some rains never leave
lurking behind the closed eyes
pain revisited





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28 comments:

  1. You know its surprising how just three lines in your post convey somthing so deep and so beautiful.

    I love it..!

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  2. Its beautiful! da lounge is goin back to its initial splendour! keep at it, Prats! :)

    luvd it!

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  3. @Ste : Thanks !

    @Arv : Thanks .. and its raining for me this month ! maybe just the season :)

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  4. @Rashmi .. its d same i felt for your words :)

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  5. Thanks for all these kind words Mav .. waiting to read your dark poetry too !

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  6. rock on ye hai waqt ki ishaara rock on zindagi milegi na dobbara ...can u make that into an haiku boss? :P

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  7. @H : hmmm .. can try ! not literal meaning .. but smthing like ds .. :)

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  8. Profound to the quantum infinity ! lovely stuff again prats !

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  9. Its raining here too Pratsie... you know it don't you? ;)

    Just the season as you say... may be... not sure!

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  10. beautiful prats...
    So little n soo expressive...

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  11. hey Ragz .. good to see your comemtn :)

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  12. awesome...so pratsie's back with a bang eh?

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  13. yeah.... yeah... :) :)

    CHeers..!!
    Arjun

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  14. Abhri ... forgot my cell @ home .. so have told my roomie to switch it off !! wanted to talk to u myself though .. but i dnt remember ur number :(

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  15. pain is inevitable..1 must learn 2 endure it :(

    short,but very meaningful..

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  16. I know Artz .. smile dear one :)

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  17. Arun, Vasudha : thanksie !! glad to read ur comemnts :)

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  18. much more happy myaself Arjun :)

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  19. Thanks Hashan .. so wen do we see your fib ??

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