July 22, 2009

THE TANGENT..!!



The tangent of your love touches me deep,
Cris crossing along my shadow,
I ran all the way up to you,
yet somehow i don't seem to have moved.

Hello everybody! My name is Rashmi and I hail from Bangalore. I am an avid reader and writer my self. I basically write poems and articles that touch me deep down. And lately I am trying my hand at 4 liner poems. Hope to keep you all well entertained with my bit.
Thank you..!
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15 comments:

  1. PS the PratsieWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:42:00 AM

    Welcome rashmi :) Your 4-liner did move me :)

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  2. MaverickWednesday, July 22, 2009 10:07:00 AM

    Welcome to the lounge, Rashmi! A wonderful start to ur stint here! waitin fr more!

    cheers! :)

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  3. hWednesday, July 22, 2009 11:08:00 AM

    welcome welcome :)

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  4. ArvWednesday, July 22, 2009 11:12:00 AM

    Hi Rush...

    well... at times, when 2 pairs of eyes get locked, I have felt that my heart and mind has gone places though my feet remained firmly rooted to one place...

    and your 4 liner pretty much captures it :)

    nice one mate...

    Hope to read more from ya...

    take care... cheers...

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  5. ArvWednesday, July 22, 2009 11:12:00 AM

    and yeah, welcome to the Lounge... :)

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  6. The Solitary WriterWednesday, July 22, 2009 11:54:00 AM

    welcome to the lounge girl

    enjoy !!!

    ur write was impressive nd hope u have a good time here....

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  7. Ilashree GoswamiWednesday, July 22, 2009 12:19:00 PM

    I liked the title of your post.... The Tangent. Its got so much in it.

    Nice lines too :)

    Way to go.....

    *SMILES*

    - Ilashree Goswami

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  8. FreelancerWednesday, July 22, 2009 4:08:00 PM

    welcome girl...
    keep writing

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  9. ViDiShAWednesday, July 22, 2009 6:33:00 PM

    ...wow dis was so gud..welcom dear..!!

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  10. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, July 22, 2009 8:51:00 PM

    Nice lines rash
    welcome to WL :)

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  11. FreelancerWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:24:00 PM

    heya...hv yu disabled coments in ur blog??? i went thru it...but cudnt comment
    :(

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  12. RASHMI RAOWednesday, July 22, 2009 9:54:00 PM

    I dont know...wait let me check..!

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  13. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Wednesday, July 22, 2009 10:33:00 PM

    left me thinking :D

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  14. RASHMI RAOWednesday, July 22, 2009 10:46:00 PM

    @ FL...

    post ur comments away..didnt realise there was some setting default...

    butterflythoughts7.blogspot.com

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  15. SonshuThursday, July 23, 2009 1:23:00 PM

    welcome rashmi. the 4 liner was amazing!

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