'Hon?'
'Hmmmm'
'Sleeping?'
'You woke up?'
'Yep! A lot early.'
'Why didn't you wake me up then?'
'I tried ringing you sweetheart. You didn't pick up.'
'Truly sorry darling. Didn't hear it ringing. Still feeling very sleepy honey.'
'Wanna hear a lullaby, my sweetest honeybuns?'
'Promise you won't go'
'I promise'
'Love you'
'Lots?'
'Hmm'
P.S| its a work of fiction...and not a poetry...though i tried to combine both forms
This was really very sweet...
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
Very much like what I dream about... :)
Nice!
@ artz
ReplyDeletewhat yu dream about eh??
About the situation you just wrote about... kinda is my dream! :D
ReplyDeletei wanna wake up each morning this way !! :)
ReplyDeletehmmmm..!!..
ReplyDelete@ pS
ReplyDeletelols....make a wish
@ vids
ReplyDeletehmmmm :P
Sweet stuff bro! gals r gonna b swoonin if u continue dis way! nice goin! ;)
ReplyDelete@ maverick
ReplyDeleteit was helluva job to make it a fib n reverse fib and as well as maintain 55 word
bt m glad i could make it :D
wow this is what dreams are made of :) wish i cd wake up every morning with such a call :D
ReplyDeleteAmazing FL :)
@ mysterious gal
ReplyDeleteone day yu will...and that day yu gonna have tel me bout it
hey Mridu.. Loved it buddy :)
ReplyDeleteNice combination of poem and fiction :D
ReplyDeletesweet work...
ReplyDeleten so much work has went behind it..
fib reverse fib, that too in 55 words...
Grt work FL...
@ hashan da
ReplyDeletethanx bro...appreciated
@ rosh
ReplyDeletethanx rosh dear
@ arun
ReplyDeletelols...as i said...i like to remix stuff...lols
fact or fiction,its real sweet 1 dude :)
ReplyDeletewish it was fact...
ReplyDelete*sigh*
sach main yh sach nahi hai..;)
ReplyDelete@ vids...
ReplyDeletenope dear....not 100 percent
wish atleast this wish of mine comes true ...
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