July 22, 2009

Conversations



'Hon?'
'Hmmmm'
'Sleeping?'
'You woke up?'
'Yep! A lot early.'
'Why didn't you wake me up then?'
'I tried ringing you sweetheart. You didn't pick up.'
'Truly sorry darling. Didn't hear it ringing. Still feeling very sleepy honey.'
'Wanna hear a lullaby, my sweetest honeybuns?'
'Promise you won't go'
'I promise'
'Love you'
'Lots?'
'Hmm'

P.S| its a work of fiction...and not a poetry...though i tried to combine both forms

22 comments:

  1. This was really very sweet...
    Loved it.

    Very much like what I dream about... :)

    Nice!

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  2. About the situation you just wrote about... kinda is my dream! :D

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  3. i wanna wake up each morning this way !! :)

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  4. Sweet stuff bro! gals r gonna b swoonin if u continue dis way! nice goin! ;)

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  5. @ maverick
    it was helluva job to make it a fib n reverse fib and as well as maintain 55 word

    bt m glad i could make it :D

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  6. wow this is what dreams are made of :) wish i cd wake up every morning with such a call :D
    Amazing FL :)

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  7. @ mysterious gal
    one day yu will...and that day yu gonna have tel me bout it

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  8. Nice combination of poem and fiction :D

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  9. sweet work...
    n so much work has went behind it..
    fib reverse fib, that too in 55 words...
    Grt work FL...

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  10. @ arun
    lols...as i said...i like to remix stuff...lols

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  11. wish atleast this wish of mine comes true ...

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