June 4, 2009

Waiting


I waited here so long
patiently for you,all time
holding to my last hopes
I waited here so long
last time,to me you told
you will teach me to fly.
I waited here so long
patiently for you,all time.


I remember well the times
when i made you wait for me
I asked others to help me fly
I remember well the times
I tried all,and lots i cried
now without you,its so lonely.
I remember well the times
when i made you wait for me.
Long back i wrote this poem speically for a friend from lounge.. lets see if that person remembers this :)

7 comments:

  1. Just let me try
    If I can fly
    Far ... away ... from you...

    If you ask me why
    I'ld feel so shy
    Scared... to... love you...

    Cant forget it!!

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  2. Haah...lovely n touching poem pratsie...

    n excellent reply Tan... wooooooow.... cute...

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  3. Like the poem!! It's brilliant :)
    roshwrites

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  4. Amazing...:)
    I really love the differnt kinds of formats of poerty writing you follow..Whr do u get to knw all these..:D

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  5. a really nice yet touching post dear..!!

    who was the one whom u wrote this poem for???

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  6. fabulous....
    hey i can even make a song out of it...wonderful lyrics...:P

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