June 17, 2009

Ocean ..


You be the blue wave

My soul, only for you it craves


I will be the sea shore

Come darling, hug me more


Everytime you leave me far behind

My tears will be carried to you by the wind


My heart says you will come again

Because you and me together make the ocean !



10 comments:

  1. All the lines were rhyming except the last one!

    Anyways.. good job Girl!! :)

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  2. cute write...
    5th , 6th lines were my fav...

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  3. hi vasu...loved the thought and the execution...you n me together making the ocean is really a deep thought...in love with the line..

    P.S.: one small thing. Plz refrain from cross posting on a weekday. I read the same poem on your blog as well. Its against the WL rules da. Cheers!

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  4. beautiful towards the end..
    "My heart says you will come again

    Because you and me together make the ocean !"

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  5. Oops sorry i first posted it on WL.. Thot i ll post it in my blog too.. M soo sorry. Next time whatever i write for WL i ll repost in my blog may b sometime later..Is tat k sandy???

    Thanx a lot.. :)

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