June 17, 2009

Ocean ..


You be the blue wave

My soul, only for you it craves


I will be the sea shore

Come darling, hug me more


Everytime you leave me far behind

My tears will be carried to you by the wind


My heart says you will come again

Because you and me together make the ocean !



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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 11:17:00 AM

    All the lines were rhyming except the last one!

    Anyways.. good job Girl!! :)

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  2. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 11:26:00 AM

    Thanx princess..

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  3. SushmitaWednesday, June 17, 2009 11:30:00 AM

    Sweet and lovely:)

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  4. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 11:33:00 AM

    Thanx rose..

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  5. Arun KumarWednesday, June 17, 2009 12:25:00 PM

    cute write...
    5th , 6th lines were my fav...

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  6. Sandeep BalanWednesday, June 17, 2009 1:36:00 PM

    hi vasu...loved the thought and the execution...you n me together making the ocean is really a deep thought...in love with the line..

    P.S.: one small thing. Plz refrain from cross posting on a weekday. I read the same poem on your blog as well. Its against the WL rules da. Cheers!

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  7. "THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD"Wednesday, June 17, 2009 1:40:00 PM

    beautiful towards the end..
    "My heart says you will come again

    Because you and me together make the ocean !"

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  8. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 1:41:00 PM

    Oops sorry i first posted it on WL.. Thot i ll post it in my blog too.. M soo sorry. Next time whatever i write for WL i ll repost in my blog may b sometime later..Is tat k sandy???

    Thanx a lot.. :)

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  9. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 1:44:00 PM

    Arun thanx dear..

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  10. AnonymousWednesday, June 17, 2009 1:44:00 PM

    hi bard..
    thanx a lot

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