July 1, 2009

The Last Tear

"Why did you punish me like this?" he cried.
He turned back, gazing at the sky, a tear trickled down his cheeks and said, "Did I not tell you I had dreaded this day?"

The bottle of poison dropped and there he lied peacefully, his eyes still gazing at the sky.

Last tear trickled down!


  1. sad story...

    a bottle of poison? what a way to go!! :(

  2. well written :) it was brilliant for a 55 fiction! :D

  3. So sad... gloomy 55 fiction... superb...

    I didnt understand it when i first read it... had to read it again...


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