May 10, 2009

Would you?


Would you take my hand,
and allow me to be thine..

Would you take me in your embrace
Caress me with your alluring gaze

Would you feel my breath
and fill my soul with your endearing warmth

Would I tingle under your touch
and see my body with desire, flush

Would you burn with desire
For our togetherness, would you aspire?

Would your lips melt against mine
Awakening those emotions unknown

Would you hold me tonight
Shade me with your comfort
Share your love, a delight

Baby, would you?

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16 comments:

  1. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 1:00:00 AM

    oh! that was so much romantic !! liked this write!!

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  2. FreelancerMonday, May 11, 2009 1:13:00 AM

    stunning gal

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  3. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 2:04:00 AM

    hey gal, i saw u asked about Acrostic poetry in Tan's poem... here is the link :


    http://weandwords.blogspot.com/2009/02/acrostic-poetry.html


    Hope to see acrostics from you soon !!

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  4. MaverickMonday, May 11, 2009 6:45:00 AM

    Passionately beautiful! luvd it! wonderful work! Keep 'em coming! :)

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  5. Zendagi MigzaraMonday, May 11, 2009 9:39:00 AM

    @ Prats,

    Thanks for the link girl.. Will check it out..
    I believe you are having some difficult time here in the Lounge, thanks to that guest..
    Don't let frivolous people affect you.. Lest atleast when that person choses to hurl insults at you behind a mask..

    So Enjoy.. (Sounds crazee na, coming from a new lounger, advising an old lounger, sowie.. But just had to tell ya this)

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  6. Zendagi MigzaraMonday, May 11, 2009 9:40:00 AM

    @ freelancer,

    Thanks dude

    @ Mav,

    Getting inspired by you guys.. Thanks buddy..

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  7. The Great Brown ExperimentMonday, May 11, 2009 10:15:00 AM

    Yes I would


    Hehehe.. Itne pyaar se pooch rahi ho! ;) Awesome work :D

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  8. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 11:20:00 AM

    hey ... that was so sweet of you !! n wats this new n old lounger ?? we are all same here :)

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  9. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 12:17:00 PM

    and good luck with acrostics .. u will like them i bet :)

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  10. SushmitaMonday, May 11, 2009 12:29:00 PM

    awww....the most beautiful emotion on this earth, more beautifully potrayed...:)

    i'm sometimes jealous of the ppl writing here...so much of mush in them...the only thing I cant write about..uhuhuh:(
    :P
    Loved your post:)

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  11. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 1:35:00 PM

    this was sooooo good! my heart melted reading this..

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  12. AnonymousMonday, May 11, 2009 8:09:00 PM

    Wow soo damn romantic..
    Loved it.. Awesome poetry :)

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  13. Arun KumarMonday, May 11, 2009 9:40:00 PM

    nice read....very romantic...good goin..

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  14. Zendagi MigzaraMonday, May 11, 2009 10:35:00 PM

    @ Ms. R,
    Well m straight so far :D..

    @ Prats,
    Will definitely try acrostics, once M a little more free

    @ Rose,Kajal, Blossom (your name's Vasudha, rite?) and Arun

    Thanks a ton guys for being there!!

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  15. piskuTuesday, May 12, 2009 10:27:00 AM

    Who can say no to that!

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  16. NyxTuesday, May 12, 2009 2:00:00 PM

    Superb!! Loved it!!

    Romance at its best!! :)

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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