May 22, 2009

Suicides Have No Coffin...


A bullet through his head...thats how it all ended...
Puncturing the cranium , Lacerating the meninges and grey matter....finally disintegrating 'her memories' from the core of his hippocampus .... 

His story is simple and uncomplicated...
He loved her... She didn't ....He stalked her ... She humiliated him.... He was crushed ... He found solace in his pistol....

Alone in the dark ... he woke up... feeling cold and wretched... separated from his anatomy... but still married to the memories of her... He thought he had fenced off her memories by putting his heart to rest... but now he is more merged with her memories than ever being amalgamated with his soul... he couldn't free himself of the pain in his heart... he smiled... does he still have one ?? 

He wandered hopelessly on all the streets of his dear little town....crossed states... crossed borders... trying to find his portal to hell...

Time passed....
He ran-out of streets to wander... finally found his way home... he was still muddled with thoughts of her... he knew he must face her... to absolve himself of her thoughts... 

He reached the street , he liked the most... her home in it... where in the park bench , once he always sat , waiting to see her face... waiting for yet another humiliation... during his mortal days...

Gates and doors couldn't stop him now... he reached her room... 
There lay his angel... still strikingly beautiful and pale... naked and safely confined in another man's arms... He never has had such a rush of pain and anger even during his mortal days , even when she rejected him , even when she humiliated him... as if the inner core of his soul was burning... He couldn't take it anymore...

He gave a deafening cry... and with his cold , stabbing hand... pierced her pale torso and squeezed the heart which he once loved so dearly... 


PS - Hope its good ... :-)

Ciao,

13 comments:

  1. super post, though it obviously sounds from a doc it sounds quite amazingly musical. Bravo!

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  2. @h...
    thanks man...
    musical..? he he...not my intentions... :-)

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  3. agree with H !! medical but still so humane !!! full of emotions :)

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  4. The first few lines were Latin - greek to me though I understood the layman's parlance.. The story, phew!! excellent dude.. simpy superbo!!

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  5. Man.. that was lovely..!!

    Very strong.. hehe ;)

    Wonderful post bro..

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. @pretty
    thanks prats...
    Hmmm...those are not med terms... :-)
    they are in 10th bio book...he he...

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  7. @zindagi
    thanks sheena...


    @arjun
    thanks bro...

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  8. y so brutal da.... too much blood.....
    A nice read.... rocking post....

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  9. @kumar
    Ite terror friday da...blood was on the cards...
    he he...

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  10. I hate such people..!
    The story was brilliantly narrated :D

    "squeezed the heart which he once loved so dearly... "

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  11. @sunshine..
    thanks for the appreciation..
    i too hate such people...its just the way world is..

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