He introduced me to her proudly, "This is my girl Sophie !"
She said hello, with Her big eyes scorching my soul,
As i sipped coffee with them,
I saw Her face with wrinkles now, I knew, she could never be me !
I felt a pity, for he lost
a Diamond while searching for a Stone !
sad for the guy! Nice one!
ReplyDelete@Pretty
ReplyDeleteHey u bak?? If m not wrong u were in ur native rite?? hope u had a blast @ home..
thanx a ton dear :)
Yea poor guy *hehehehe* :p
lol...sounds so real!!!
ReplyDelete@FreeLancer
ReplyDeletePartially real !! LoL :p
nt bak yet.bt got hold of net on my sister's mobile.. Wndr hw u knw of my hme trip.. Coz i dnt remember readng u before.. Anyway thx! U inspired me to write smthng on my own blog.
ReplyDeletedefinitely his loss!!!
ReplyDeletegud one!!!
@NuMb
ReplyDeleteI bet it is ! *hehehe*
Thanx a ton :)
@Pretty
ReplyDeleteHmmm no ma i read in some comment tat u r in home town.. Any way comebak soon.. :)
short n sharp...and very expressive too..
ReplyDeletereal life..??
gr8 piece....very expressive
ReplyDeletestrong, intense and with a message...loved it.. :)
ReplyDelete@Arun
ReplyDeleteHmmm thanx dear..
Might be real in someone's life !
@Appu
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
@Pink
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
good one vasudha! :)
ReplyDeletestrong one!
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ReplyDeleteA Diamond you are, girl!!!
ReplyDelete@Leo
ReplyDeleteThanx dear :)
@Migzie
ReplyDeleteThanx honey.. Yes i am :)
short but powerful....
ReplyDeletesimple yet expressive.....
nice written dear.
poor guy ll realize one day that he lost the diamond.... ;-)
Vil
ReplyDeleteThanx bandar :)