Beneath this pale, placid skin,
My soul embarks on journeys,
Infinitely mysterious, thrilling and bizarre!
On one such journey I stumble upon,
A locked door, partially hidden, forgotten,
Inquisitive my soul; I enter,
A chamber; dark, ominous,
Stumbling along the path unseen,
Hands outstretched, groping, acting as my vision,
A blinding light dazzles my eyes,
I spy a dream, descend slowly,
From the unseen heights, unachieved, distraught,
Dead!
Crawling into a crevice, It lies,
Still, immobile; I realize,
I stand in the catacombs, the tomb of my dreams,
Where every hope, every wish, every desire,
I ever felt was banished, executed, life never giving them,
A chance to be born, to become real,
To exist!
By the fading glow, I step ahead,
I see, my life laid out,
In front of me, my fantasies,
Lying listless, Sepia tinged,
Cold, from their death!
Living it all over again, the pain, the hurt,
I turn away, nauseated, unable to take it anymore,
Running back I find, no exit, no door,
A one way trip this was,
Relentless, I try to find a way out,
Coz am suffocating, the morbid stench,
Of slowly decomposing desires, overwhelming me,
Grim silver spectres surround me,
Shrill echoes, reverberate,
A requiem they sing for my soul,
Trapped here for infinity,
In this sarcophagus, of unfulfilled hopes,
These catacombs of relegated dreams!
PS: Images courtesy - deviantart.com
hmmm..fear...dreads...all described beautifully!
ReplyDeleteliked it a lot:)
@ Rose
ReplyDeleteTY!
I already said .. u r the master of dark writes !! brilliant !!
ReplyDeleteif its a red courier font, the write is 99% written by the dark master, maverick! :D
ReplyDeletenice read dude! :D
Mave ,add me in ya fan list..its a superb one bro! u r d master !!
ReplyDelete@ Prats
ReplyDeleteThank u so much! *hugs*
:)
@ Leo
ReplyDeleteKinda my signature, it has becum, hasnt it? :P
Nice alias: Dark Master :P :P :P
Long way to go mate! :)
TY so much fr liking it!
@ Hashan
ReplyDeleteThank u so much! I'll b honoured to to have a reader lik u!
:)
brilliant...
ReplyDeleteany chance this was inspired by brad pitts character in interview with the vampire...?? jus curious...
@ Arun Kumar
ReplyDeleteThanks bro!
No havent seen dat movie! nd dis is not goin wid da theme of da vampires, dude!
This is da experience of a lonely guy whose only way of passing time is to introspect nd hence he embarks on journeys within hs own psyche! nd finds da tomb of his unfulfilled dreams! :)
dats wat it is!
@maverick
ReplyDeletesorry didn't see it from that angle...
was in a vampire frenzy...n also pale skin sacrophagus got me confused...
but my angle makes sense too... :-)
Running back I find, no exit, no door,
ReplyDeleteA one way trip this was,
Relentless, I try to find a way out,
Coz am suffocating, the morbid stench,
Of slowly decomposing desires, overwhelming me,
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could relate to these lines the most.. :)
@ Arun
ReplyDeleteSure does...ur angle's good too!
I was jst communicating da topic dat I dealt wid!
Anoda perspective always helps mate! :)
@ Kajal
ReplyDeleteThanks fr readin dis! glad I could write sumthng u cld relate to! :)