May 6, 2009

Peace Will come


In continuation to Hashan's post here....

You are
a beloved!
The dearest child of almighty
Impossible For God to leave you...
believe me!!



- PULKIT TIWARI

Also blog at....

(POETIC CRIES OF INTERPERSONAL EXPRESSIONS)



dint knew much of this poetry... as far as what I know... the syllable count is 2,4,6,8 ...2 !!

correct me if I am wrong please!



Got a strong intution of something @ hashan's end... extending him a hand of friendship and support!

introducing a new label "OPTIMISM AFTER SADNESS" :) coooooool!

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19 comments:

  1. TanWednesday, May 06, 2009 8:47:00 PM

    You are right, Pulkit... Peace will come...

    And you are right again with the syllable count. Its 2-4-6-8-2 ... and thats the End of the poem!!

    Well done... well written :)

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  2. TanWednesday, May 06, 2009 8:50:00 PM

    However Pulkit, the syllable count in your poem is: 2-4-9-9-3
    Please take a look in to the same.. :)

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  3. FreelancerWednesday, May 06, 2009 8:55:00 PM

    somebody teach me

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  4. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:12:00 PM

    @ Pulkit

    Thanks for such a nice reply :))Loved it bro !!


    @ tan

    I am getting 2-4-8-9-2 in http://www.haikuwithteeth.com/index.php

    @ freelancer

    Buddy, it very easy like it should be 5 lines poetry, rhyming not required and syllable count should be 2-4-6-8-2... thats it..and ya , words from your beautiful mind :P..waiting for your attempt !!

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  5. hasHAN hazaRIKAWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:15:00 PM

    @ pulkit

    Accepted both !! friendship and support :)

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  6. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:37:00 PM

    wah wah! i really liked it!

    I love short poems, which say a lot.. :)

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  7. FreelancerWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:56:00 PM

    yea its 2-4-8-9-2

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  8. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 10:01:00 PM

    Wow Pulkit.. innovative labels seem to be your field of excellence.. keep it up!

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  9. SaimWednesday, May 06, 2009 10:57:00 PM

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  10. The Great Brown ExperimentThursday, May 07, 2009 12:49:00 PM

    Agree with Kajal. Proud to call you my bro. ;)

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  11. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:00:00 PM

    @ tan - thanks sir!

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  12. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:01:00 PM

    @ tan - sorry I missed a line this time sir! will try not to repeat mistake again!

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  13. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:02:00 PM

    @ freelancer - ur querry answered by hanshan !! thanks for commenting!

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  14. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:03:00 PM

    @ hashan - hugs!!

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  15. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:03:00 PM

    @ .a - thanks :)

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  16. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:04:00 PM

    @ pink orchid - just felt that since reply to posts is in the culture here... a label like this will help out to bring a smile in reply to a nostalgic post by some other frn :)

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  17. PULKITThursday, May 07, 2009 2:05:00 PM

    @ Ms R - thanks sis!

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  18. AnonymousSaturday, May 09, 2009 1:32:00 PM

    hats off to u! :)

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  19. PULKITMonday, May 11, 2009 7:50:00 PM

    @ leo - thanks for the appreciation vinay :)

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