May 6, 2009

Peace Will come


In continuation to Hashan's post here....

You are
a beloved!
The dearest child of almighty
Impossible For God to leave you...
believe me!!



- PULKIT TIWARI

Also blog at....

(POETIC CRIES OF INTERPERSONAL EXPRESSIONS)



dint knew much of this poetry... as far as what I know... the syllable count is 2,4,6,8 ...2 !!

correct me if I am wrong please!



Got a strong intution of something @ hashan's end... extending him a hand of friendship and support!

introducing a new label "OPTIMISM AFTER SADNESS" :) coooooool!

19 comments:

  1. You are right, Pulkit... Peace will come...

    And you are right again with the syllable count. Its 2-4-6-8-2 ... and thats the End of the poem!!

    Well done... well written :)

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  2. However Pulkit, the syllable count in your poem is: 2-4-9-9-3
    Please take a look in to the same.. :)

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  3. @ Pulkit

    Thanks for such a nice reply :))Loved it bro !!


    @ tan

    I am getting 2-4-8-9-2 in http://www.haikuwithteeth.com/index.php

    @ freelancer

    Buddy, it very easy like it should be 5 lines poetry, rhyming not required and syllable count should be 2-4-6-8-2... thats it..and ya , words from your beautiful mind :P..waiting for your attempt !!

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  4. @ pulkit

    Accepted both !! friendship and support :)

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  5. wah wah! i really liked it!

    I love short poems, which say a lot.. :)

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  6. Wow Pulkit.. innovative labels seem to be your field of excellence.. keep it up!

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  8. Agree with Kajal. Proud to call you my bro. ;)

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  9. @ tan - sorry I missed a line this time sir! will try not to repeat mistake again!

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  10. @ freelancer - ur querry answered by hanshan !! thanks for commenting!

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  11. @ pink orchid - just felt that since reply to posts is in the culture here... a label like this will help out to bring a smile in reply to a nostalgic post by some other frn :)

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  12. @ leo - thanks for the appreciation vinay :)

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