May 6, 2009

Bereavement

The pain lingers in my eyes
My reality has turned in a petty lie
The soul tarnished
Emotions whimper
Lifeless beauty
Hazy goals
The broken heart
Stage of life but I have no part
Hatred, anger is all that is left
Life that was mine, but now is theft.



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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:23:00 PM

    thats a delightful read sweet :)

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  2. TweetyWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:34:00 PM

    woaahhh i luv u asbah....and the title is again that i am grateful to u...

    thanks dear...

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  3. The Solitary WriterWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:52:00 PM

    strong words hai yaar
    cant be a bettr meduim to express ur feelings
    very strong words
    soul tarnished,emotions whimper
    godd
    u make me proud
    apne mindset ko poem thru
    delightful like asbah said

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  4. FreelancerWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:55:00 PM

    yaar yu r gud at this...tried limericks????

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  5. AnonymousWednesday, May 06, 2009 9:59:00 PM

    beautiful Tweets...

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  6. Arun KumarWednesday, May 06, 2009 10:06:00 PM

    loved the entire poem...very dark n gloomy....
    luv the last 3 lines ...put together very well...

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  7. SaimWednesday, May 06, 2009 10:56:00 PM

    super stuff...despair and gloom at their very best!!!

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  8. The Great Brown ExperimentThursday, May 07, 2009 12:50:00 PM

    Nice one :)

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  9. AnonymousSaturday, May 09, 2009 1:32:00 PM

    i already told u! this was AWESOME!

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