May 19, 2009

My First Crush

She was the most beautiful angel in the whole of my block. I am restricting it to my block because my movements at that time were restricted within our block. The farthest I could go was to the gate of our society where the watchman would throw a questioning glance at me and promptly turn my bicycle around, without batting an eyelid. He would also roll his eyes to scare the living daylights out of me. "Dobara gate se baahar jaane ka try kiya to kaan pakadke aapke mama ke paas le jaaunga". This was enough for me to double my speed and dash back towards home. I did not like shackles. My freedom was being curtaliled. I was all alone in this world of nasty and burly watchmens and big gates.

The ice cream shop at the corner was where I would sit for minutes and weep, licking away my cone till the last drop would melt in my mouth. I would sit there after buying my cone of chocolate delight with the coins mom would put in my pocket every morning without fail. She would smile and wink at me after handing me these coins. That was how I learnt that money can buy you all joys in this world, but not the joys I craved for. How could I tell her that I did not want her pocket money? All I wanted was to go out and earn. Earn and buy things for her and my dad. I was big enough. I wanted to explore this world. I wanted to break free. I was alone.

It was 23rd March, which was like any other day till that moment. That day is special for me because that was when I first saw this angel. And that's where i gave her the title of "The most beautiful girl in my block". Following my daily routine like a ritual, I sat there at the ice cream shop licking my cone. These were the moments where I would lose myself in the taste of the icecream. I would not trade off that cone of mine for all the money in the world. I was enjoying every bit of it. That was when I saw her walk in. Wearing a pink night suit , she had this charm about her which could turn the busiest of heads. Her chubby cheeks were the most rosy ones that I had ever seen. She was an epitome of cuteness. I always had this thing for tall girls of my society. Though she was much shorter than I was, she still had my attention. She had put me in a state of trance. The way she had tucked her hair to her back in a ponytail and the way it swayed with her every step made me fall for her. I had lost my heart there and then.

That was when I did it. Unknowingly. I still remember it vividly as if it were yesterday. The memory is engraved in my soul. I crushed the cone i held. That was my first crush! I have been crushed a numerous times after that. :-) :-)



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47 comments:

  1. thats a cute crush..!!! Nicely expresed Sandeep..!!!

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  2. @yamini

    he he...I started quite early you see :-)

    P.S.: It's just a figment of my imagination :-)

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  3. @doc

    thnx...fiction bro :-)

    glad you liked it. To be frank, the pic inspired me to write this story. And i cooked it all up in a few minutes and posted it here. How could i miss out on "Love laced Tuesdays"...he he...cheers!!

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  4. good one bro...... keep rocking......

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  5. wow.. It that little girl was an epitome of cuteness.. so does this post.. :)

    Cuteness and innocence all over.. N not to mention the lovely narration.. :)

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. that was a fiction.....hmm..!!!!

    I thought you still remember the li'l princess of your life..!!!

    but still...that was a nice work..!!!

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  7. pink night suit and 23rd march.. :D :D :D :D

    i didnt expect the post to turn out this way.. innnaaaaaaaaaaaaa bada grin kar rahein hain... :D

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  8. will keep coming back to this post whole day long.. :D hhaaahaaaahaah masti day today!


    p.s. you have got mail Mr Founder The Great :D

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  9. so very cute !! loved the imagination dude :)

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  10. Is it fiction? Should have been true!!!!

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  11. Are you suffering from PINKomania????

    Lol... A very cute post Bro.. :)

    Innocence all over... 'I was all alone in this world of nasty and burly watchmens and gates'...lol!

    And the last few lines... :P

    I loved it completely!

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  12. you crushed the cone you held and that was your first crush.. go go Balan! you raak! :D you rule!

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  13. Sir Ji!
    The pic is cute..and knowin' it inspired you to write this, Hats off to your imagination :D:D
    And tell me the ice-cream coe's flavour was "strawberry crush"..goes well with the mood:P:P

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  14. Hey,

    That was choo choo very very Cutee!! Can't resist simling and the pic is the icing on the cake..

    Beautiful...

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  15. look at the pouting lips..look at her pony tell.. awweee look at the icecream cone.. oolllleeeee... :P

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  16. Indeed a cuteeee write :) Loved it sirjee :D

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  17. that baby looks so like you.. awweeee look at those cheeks.. awweee.. hhehheeeeh :D

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  18. Kajal totally in love with this..!!!!!!!!!! superrrrrrrrr...

    *winks at Sandeep*

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  19. @doc

    gald taht you liked it arun..yeyyyyy!! *jumps around with joy*

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  20. @arjun

    bro.....welcome back!! this place has been so serious without this jester n partner in crime...welcome welcome...and gear up for thursday :-)

    yup....innocently cute this one :-) want a cone?

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  21. @yamini

    he he...i so hope i had met someone at that age..did not...so had to resort to fiction...but every fiction is someone's reality according to some great one...and moreover....when i wrote it..i lived it :-)

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  22. @pink sambhar

    oyeeeeeeeeeeee...kaun aaya yeh yahaan!! aaye aaye...this place missed you so so so very much...me toooo!! belcome belcome *ping* *ping* *ping*

    look at that dumb expression on that cutie pie's face...big eyes...chubby cheeks..he he....aweeeeeeee!!!

    *hugssss*

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  23. @pink cauliflower

    yup...masti day...everyday is masti day...and you have loads of masti to catch up on coz of your conspicious absence for the last two days...rock on!!

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  24. hehehehehehe 'every fiction is someone's reality - said a great someone' 'i lived it when i wrote it' :)

    now someone is talking.. :D and that calls for another read of this post. :D

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  25. catching up yeah.. ketchup ban jayega mera catch up karte karte... but hum honge kamyaab.. :D

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  26. @prats

    you did!! you did!! wow!! *chest swells with pride*

    yippppeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! dealing with kids is so much trouble i tell you. Had to write from the eyes of a kid and keep it innocent n cute. Tough i tell you...just experienced it :-)

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  27. dealing with kids is so much trouble ---

    hahahaaahahaaahaha *evil laughter*

    :)

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  28. @bhargav

    It's true...It's true...I lived it when i wrote it...is not every film a directors reality o great critic? how many stars for this kid venture o great critic...he he :-)

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  29. @aarthi...

    yaaa...from pinkaria :-)

    so the one who is scared of this guy liked it haan? Dont be scared...dont be scared...smile karo...chalo smile karo...he he..cheers! thats for the first time someone has said that he/she is scared of me! phew!! glad that atleast someone is!

    Glad that you loved my take...cheers!! yeyyyyyyy!!

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  30. @the pink egg

    crushed it...he he he...i raaaaak on....raaaaaak on....raaaaaaaking to the music....raaaaaaaking to the tunes....raaaaaaaaaaaaak on...rule.....hmmmm....i rule myself..he he he :-) dilo ki begum toh aap hain o pink lungi :-)

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  31. @rose

    keep your hats on sushmita...keep your hats on...nahi toh logon ko pata chal jaayega ki you are going bald...

    :-) :-)

    Glad that you liked it yar...was tough pulling off the innocence considering the monster i am...but managed...and was waiting for the verdict with bated breath...happy....yeyyyyyyy!!!

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  32. monster? :O himmat kaise hui? how dare you? :O roshni daaliye..

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  33. lovely crush bro....

    "cooked it up"..???
    seriously...i thought this was taken outta your life... :-)

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  34. @ Sandeep,

    Yup, the girl who is scared of you loved it :P

    Haan bhai, koi toh hona hi chahiye jo apse darey! *biting nails* Lol!

    Cheers
    *PEACE*

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  35. @Sheena

    Keep smiling...the next best thing you can do with your mouth after abuse :-) :-) he he...

    Glad that you liked it...Sandhosham aayi :-)

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  36. @pinku

    look look look.......aweeeeeeeee...he he :-)

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  37. @hashan

    you did.....yeyyyyyyyy!! :-) :-) loved conjuring it up as well :-)

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  38. @pink lily

    like meee....ooooooohhhhhhh...itna buddhu dikhta hoon main...aweeeeeeee..this one is soooo cute re..aur hum toh daanav hain :-)

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  39. @RJ

    he he he *winks back*

    It took an ice cream cone to make her fall in love :-)

    Cheers!

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  40. @pink rose

    aur ek baar padhogi toh bacche photo se baahar nikalke aa jaayenge aapke paas..he he :-)

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  41. @pink hibiscus

    yup...but i love dealing with kids...they are so adorable n naughty.....n soooooo lovable...their cheeks....aweeeeee :-)

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  42. @pink star

    oops...sorry...monster nahi...monster nahi...kid...smile :-)

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  43. @arun

    yup...cooked up with love n affection...i lived it while writing it...feels great to know that it had the ring of reality to it...yeyyyyyy!!

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  44. @RT

    Cheers...Peace...God bless :-)

    Dont bite your nails...and dnt be scared...see...he is harmless...try touching him with your finger...dont flinch...see...he is harmless...smile...smile...dont be afraid...yaa...like that...:-)

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  45. the last line pinched me somewhere deep inside, but all good! hehe ap shuru say hi aysay thay yani :P :P

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  46. i just can't have enough of this pic oye.. :)

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