He asked me to forget him
is it really that easy?
it hurts even to think so
leave alone really doing it.
why did he ever bring
such joys to my dull life
how can he now,not worry
to leave tears in my eyes?
I begged him not to go
i could not see any reason,
I told i would do anything
to keep him with me all seasons.
all i could do is to wait
for him to get some sense
in moving away from me,
i know he even hurt himself.
ps : This poem was written by me one year back for my best friend. And gladly he got his senses withing 24 hrs :)
Good one Prats.... vry expressive.....
ReplyDeletethanks Kumar !!
ReplyDeleteWhen ur P.S happens always.. it wld be so much better na.. !! :)
ReplyDeleteAptly expressed poem Prats..!! :)
Cheers..!!
Arjun
so very true Arjun !! thanks :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem...
ReplyDeleteas Arjun said..
Its better to have PS happen sometimes in love n friendship...make it more stronger...
Things which I once thought, that I could tell "him".. Now you say it..
ReplyDeletebeautiful words Prats:)
ReplyDeletedid he get back to his sense after reading this???
@Arun .. i have to agree !! too much love dsnt last :)
ReplyDeletemy pleasure Sheena !!
ReplyDeletedid u not read the ps siam !!
ReplyDeletewell done Pratsie. very well done, for making your friend realise what he was missing on.. :D
ReplyDeleteFighting and getting back is where the essence of all relations lies..
ReplyDeleteA very expressive one prats..:)
:)
ReplyDeletemade me remember sumthn about my past dear....got nostalgic
ReplyDeletethankuu all fr the read frnds !! i know this happens with all of us smtimes !!
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