May 13, 2009

Hope..

I cling onto the rope of hope,
Hope that you once gave me,
that which now snaps -

with every broken promise,
with every shattered dream,
with that unbroken silence

Our relationship threadbare..
what remains... is a strand -
that which binds the remnants of our past

This snaps.. the love in me will breathe its last!!

P.S: Tried a hand at 55 fiction, guys guide me through...

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15 comments:

  1. Arun KumarWednesday, May 13, 2009 10:32:00 PM

    wow...very appealing poem...that too in 55 words...covered a lot of pain...
    loved it...

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  2. Zendagi MigzaraWednesday, May 13, 2009 10:44:00 PM

    @ Arun,

    Thanks machan!! :D

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  3. Poshin_davidWednesday, May 13, 2009 10:57:00 PM

    Amazing.......touches and stirs one's emotions doesn't it?

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  4. Poshin_davidWednesday, May 13, 2009 10:58:00 PM

    And can someone invite me to write in this place.........

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  5. Arun KumarWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:03:00 PM

    ok machi....u know tamil ?? or jus afew words..?

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  6. Zendagi MigzaraWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:06:00 PM

    @ Arun,
    Actually m a mallu.. So can understand tamil..

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  7. Zendagi MigzaraWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:08:00 PM

    @ Chris,

    You can leave a message at the shoutbox, which you would find currently in the left hand side.. just leave your mail ID and request and the needful would be done..

    Thanks for dropping by my blog :D

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  8. Aayushi MehtaWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:09:00 PM

    dont know about 55 and all but really liked the poem:)

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  9. Zendagi MigzaraWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:18:00 PM

    @ Aayushi,

    Hey.. Glad you liked it.. Actually my first try with 55 fiction.. it means a poem/ prose of 55 words only..:)

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  10. AnonymousWednesday, May 13, 2009 11:53:00 PM

    sheena .. i hope this is ur name .. this is a nice poem !! and i say poem specially coz its not a 55 fiction.. A poem is not fiction !! though basic rules say 55 fiction is limited to 55 words .. but in reality n usage, fiction is a story .. so 55 fiction is a short story .. more accurately its a flash fiction !! i will search some about it more on net and get back !


    ut this overlooked, this was a lovely write .. so poignant !!

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  11. SushmitaThursday, May 14, 2009 12:36:00 AM

    hmmm...hopefull:)
    nice write:)

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  12. hasHAN hazaRIKAThursday, May 14, 2009 6:01:00 AM

    A nice write :)

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  13. Zendagi MigzaraThursday, May 14, 2009 9:09:00 AM

    @ Prats,
    Ohh.. Well was not aware of that.. Point noted. Next time will try a prose.. But just a thought, can't poem be fiction?? Please resolve this query!!

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  14. Zendagi MigzaraThursday, May 14, 2009 9:09:00 AM

    @ Rose and Hashan,

    Thanks buddies

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  15. AnonymousThursday, May 14, 2009 12:41:00 PM

    waaah waah... pain portrayed so beautifully!

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