May 8, 2009

My spritual jagran-2 !!


part 1

He could hear a couple of mosquitoes singing around his ears.Then the sage pointed towards the fan and asked,"Son!Can you scold it for five minutes?".
He had not watched too many Hollywood movies till then and Vishal Bharadwaj's 'Omkara' was far from being scripted in 2001.Surely he was not up to the expectations.So the sage blessed him with some more 'taste the thunder' types blows.
Someone was playing 'comfortably numb*' in the distant.

'Can you show me where it hurts?

There is no pain, you are receding.
A distant ships smoke on the horizon.
You are only coming through in waves.
Your lips move but I cant hear what you're sayin.
When I was a child I had a fever.
My hands felt just like two balloons.
Now I got that feeling once again.
I cant explain, you would not understand.
This is not how I am.
I have become comfortably numb.'


*by- Pink Floyd.


to be continued....

11 comments:

  1. going gud.. Did nt comment on the first part bt lykd it for sure..

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  2. Thank you so much Prats :) i was thinking lounge ko shayad achcha nahi lag raha hai :D

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  3. This mystery is getting me curious.. I guess suspense which unfolds in tit-bits, has the reader guled to it..

    Good going, dude..

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  4. mow that certainly is a different take on "Comfortably Numb":D
    gud gng mate:)

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  5. @Zendagi

    Thanks :))its gonna unfold tommrow..watch this space :))

    @freelance

    hahaha..wait till tommrow


    @ CN

    yeah..it is !! thanks buddy :)

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  6. kyon ki likha hi nahi hai next part :p lol

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