May 21, 2009

Dramatic Verse!

One day in Prats' poetry class...

Prats :...So now you know the basic of rhyming. I want all of you to write four lines in verse form and bring it to our next class.

The next poetry class...

Prats : Ste, read out loudly what you have written.

Ste : Yes, Ma'am!

A boy was walking down the track,
The train was coming fast.
The boy stepped off the rail road track,
To let the train go past.


Prats : Not bad, Ste but you could have made it more dramatic. Sandeep, you try.

Sandeep : More dramatic...er...ummm...

A boy was walking down the track,
The train was coming fast
er...
The train jumped off the rail road track,
To let the boy go past.



Till the next time,
Rose

P.S. Sorry Prat Di, Ste and Sandeep "Dude"...couldnt help myself :P

16 comments:

  1. wow... lol lol ..

    That was good :)

    I cld actually imagine sandeep doing it.. hehe :P

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  2. Kudos to you Rose :)

    Loved it...you left me in splits! :P

    Cheers

    *PEACE*

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  3. @Arjun
    hehehe...truely..sandeep can!
    Thanks:)

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  4. @Aarthi
    Thanks re...even M still roflmao...how could I write this :D

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  5. Kamaal kar ditta oye !! mwah !! lage raho !!

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  6. @Trat Di
    thanks :D
    keep laighing:D
    aj to thursday hai, n the lounge is fun today :D

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  7. the best part is 'sandeep' could have actually done it... :D hahahahaha too good!!

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  8. lol! true, thats how he puts the melodrama in it ;)
    spice u know!

    lol.. nicely pointed out :D

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  9. dramatic......dramatic...I would have made the train fly....and ste the pilot of the plane :-) :-)

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