Palkon main saja li hai maine
Dhoondti hoon unme
Kuch khoye lamhe
Kabhi Hansi Muskurahoton main
To kabhi un bhigi siskiyon main
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Un soonsaan galiyon main
Anjaan bheed ki saaye main
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Un sukhe hue phoolon main
Un bejaan tasveeron main
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Milon faili tanhaiyi main
Dhadakte dil ki gehrayee main
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Un Khamosh aahon main
Toote sapno ki rahon main,
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Khali dil ke kamre main
Sooni aakhon ke aaine main
dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
Aaj bhi talaash jaari hai -
Aasman ke chadar tale
Zameen ke baahon pare...
"un khamoshiyo main
ReplyDeletekabhi vo baato main
kabhi raat k sapno main
to kabhi dil ki dhadkan main,
dhoondhti hu tumahe"
this lines for your poem
hope i write according to ur poem
nice poem keep it up
Made me think of that OLD Kishore-Devanand song:
ReplyDeleteKiska rasta dekhe, ay dil ay soudaayi..
Milo hai khamoshi.. barso hai tanhayee..I think people will miss and search for them, whom they loved - more than once!!
barhiya hai :) i loved it.. aisa koyi talash mujhe bhi hain :D
ReplyDelete@ Chirag,
ReplyDeleteHey those lines match my poem, thanks dude...
@ Tan,
Its strange why we miss people so much when not even their shadows exist in our life.....
@Hashan,
My wishes ki tumhari talaash ki manzil ho... :)
aaawww...such s sweet poem:)
ReplyDeleteI guess everyone, sometimes in their life, looks for someone or something so desperately...nce read:)
Very very impressive...understand da undertone nd so relate to it! wonderful work again, sheena! keep at it! :)
ReplyDelete@ Rose & Maverick,
ReplyDeleteThanks buddies..
wowww i loved d lines sheena...
ReplyDeleteUn Khamosh aahon main
Toote sapno ki rahon main,
Dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
very touching..keep it up...
Khali dil ke kamre main
ReplyDeleteSooni aakhon ke aaine main
dhoondti hoon tumhe!!
*sighs* :(
@ Kaju (I can call you that??)
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by
awwee you can very well call me that!! :D you don't have to ask.. :D
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