May 19, 2009

a dedication to a very strong girl ....LOVE AND ITS SHADES - 1

Inspired by my last 1 hour at G-talk....



Always a dilemma of good or bad
promises the heavens of cheers
and leaves one in a phase so sad!

It is a betrayal for those who trust!
It is a never ending pain for those who fell!
It is a loneliness that never fades away!
The agony that comes and stay!

TRY NOT FALLING IN LOVE!

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[READ THESE LINES SOMEWHERE]

HOW TRUE THESE ARE...


"Nobody understands love," the writer admits. "It seems to be Universal. Timeless. Yet, it's also very individual, filtered by our own lives and expectations. I don't understand love, and can't understand love, because it's a different thing for each of us."

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Now coming to the point ......


I noticed a tear drop
trying to trace its path...
wish to wipe it off...
and also wipe the so many others
that wets your pillow!

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(ALSO BLOGS @ - POETIC CRIES OF INTERPERSONAL EXPRESSIONS)Link

19 comments:

  1. love is what you want it to be...loved the first lines:)

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  2. Love is not said
    Its believed
    It differs between hearts
    Its the best feeling..!!!

    Nice post Pulkit...i loved the last lines..!!!

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  3. really nice.....The following line rocks though you can't avoid it ,,

    TRY NOT FALLING IN LOVE!
    Cheers

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  4. It is a betrayal for those who trust!
    It is a never ending pain for those who fell!
    It is a loneliness that never fades away!
    The agony that comes and stay!




    i relate to these lines !!

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  5. With the comments on this post.. u can figure out who's presently in love.. who's not.. n who was in love and isn't now... hehe.. ;)

    But seriously.... this literally touched me.... Love is beautiful... The separation, if it follows, is the most painful.... :)

    Now.. mine was too easy to guess.. !!

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  6. Yes those lines which Prats pointed.. they are... true to the core!!

    Now to your poem... Wonderful

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  7. lol@Arjun's comment.. :)

    I love the way you express that 'you care' hugssssssssss!!

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  8. love the lines prats has quoted...

    Love the prose in the middle very very much...

    especially the line..."Love is universal n timeless..n its also very individual"....

    Went thro u blog bro...lovin it...followin it...

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  9. LoL @Arjun .. and now we know about u too :P

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  10. loved all of it! the two poems, and the one liner that supported it :) beautiful!

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  11. @ numb - thanks for the appreication!

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  12. @ chris - it was a tag from a moive called dev d!

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  13. @ pratsie - hey sis! look up... cheer dear!
    makin u nostalgic was never the intent of my post and it never would be...

    :)

    dont relate too much :P

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  14. @ arun - heyaaaaa thanks :)
    I will go through yours too after 22nd when my exams get over!
    thats a promise!
    :)

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