May 6, 2009

Bereavement

The pain lingers in my eyes
My reality has turned in a petty lie
The soul tarnished
Emotions whimper
Lifeless beauty
Hazy goals
The broken heart
Stage of life but I have no part
Hatred, anger is all that is left
Life that was mine, but now is theft.




also at http://thehope-life.blogspot.com/

9 comments:

  1. thats a delightful read sweet :)

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  2. woaahhh i luv u asbah....and the title is again that i am grateful to u...

    thanks dear...

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  3. strong words hai yaar
    cant be a bettr meduim to express ur feelings
    very strong words
    soul tarnished,emotions whimper
    godd
    u make me proud
    apne mindset ko poem thru
    delightful like asbah said

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  4. yaar yu r gud at this...tried limericks????

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  5. loved the entire poem...very dark n gloomy....
    luv the last 3 lines ...put together very well...

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  6. super stuff...despair and gloom at their very best!!!

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  7. i already told u! this was AWESOME!

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