April 26, 2009

Who was she? - 1


She starred! I was hypnotized!

How can someone's eyes be so expressive?


“Hi! Do I know you?” I asked her in a stammering sheepish tone!
“NO! But I know everything about you Pulkit! “ she replied in calm authoritative manner!

In a blink she disappeared in shadows from where she came!

I stood freeze! “Who was she?”


(PULKIT TIWARI)



(PS :- THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT ON 55 FICTION also Introducing the label "horror" for the first time @ WL)...

14 comments:

  1. waiting for more .... will read after m back :)

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  2. thanks for comments again!
    seems that ur the onl one reading me now prats! :) thanks!
    by the way... from where r u talking of coming back? I mean... going somewhere or what???

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  3. nice write up pulkit...!!!

    waiting for more...!!! bestwishes always there...!!!

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  4. u need to read what i write to know abt me Pulkit :P


    neway m going home tomorrow.. will be back in mid may :)

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  5. @ yamini - thanks a ton mam!
    :)
    will be back soon... perhaps after 2nd!
    on this one!

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  6. @ prats - all the best dear!
    enjoy a million times at home! wishing u good times :)

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  7. horror.. woaa.. waiting for more. scare us! :D

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  8. *chilly* considering the fact that i had been hearing a lot abt ghosts!

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  9. pulkit, poem in a 55fiction? wow bro, u r goood! :)

    and yamini ko ma'am mat bula karo yaar! :)

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  10. @ kajal - thanks for the comments!:)

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  11. @ leo - hey bro! whats up? arrey bhai! it wasnt a poem!
    anyway...thanks a ton for the the comments bro!
    and yaar, I dont know many members personally here as of now so thats why used the formal "mam!"

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  12. Horror.. -_- ...good one bro..waiting for the next post..

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