There was a picture in my mind,
I named her happiness
I'm in that picture today,
but I can't find happiness
There is a new picture now,
called happiness
I do not reconginze,
when I see happiness
Because I know her only,
by that picture named happiness
I also write @ the world round me
i liked it pisku..short and sweet...
ReplyDelete:) cute :)
ReplyDeleteHappiness Happiness all the way.. I found it intense and thoughtful.. good one Pisku!
ReplyDeletethis poem can have different interpretations by different readers..and that is called poetry in its true sense ..:)
@IMM: Thanks!
ReplyDelete@Miss Sunshine: Glad u liked it!
@Kajal: Thanks Kajal. Yup, this one does have a few interpretations :)
ReplyDeleteCrispy.. amazing one :)
ReplyDeletethis is what i call the beauty of poetry ...beautiful with the scope of interpretations...so much said in so few lines...loved it to the core :D
ReplyDelete@Hasan: Thanks again!
ReplyDelete@Mysterious gal: glad u did :D
ReplyDeleteInteresting take on Happiness !! liked it :)
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