As she perched beside the window, she was in an unusual pensive self.
The alluring moon further enticed her into the vivid memories of the past.
“I am Sorry”, was all she remembered now of that moonlit night.
And she wondered can a simple S-O-R-R-Y really heal all wounds!
Prompted and Submitted@3WW
P.S. This is also my first attempt at fiction 55 as well 3WW. So i m looking forward to genuine comments which would be helpful.
Crossposted@My Personal Blog
this was intense !! and so very true :)
ReplyDeleteThis was wonderful! eerily true and beautifully put forward! likd it! :)
ReplyDeleteme liked it too :)
ReplyDeleteme liked it too :)
ReplyDeletenicely written nabila...intense feelings...wow
ReplyDeletebeautifully written!
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regards
PULKIT
(http://19goes20.blogspot.com)
"And she wondered can a simple S-O-R-R-Y really heal all wounds!"
ReplyDeleteIntense thoughts!
Lovely!
@Prats thanks so much :-)
ReplyDelete@ Maverick glad u liked it :)
@ Kajal i m just so glad u read and liked it as i just love ur 55 fictions and prompt writing and this is my first attempt at it. i m just so glad :)
@Aparna thanks so much dear :)
@Pulkit thanks :)
@Mohita i know quite intense but so true at times too..glad u liked it :)
there seems to be some confusion... i have never attempted prompts or 55 fiction.. will try my hands on them soon.. :)
ReplyDeleteif you meant you like my work.. - i am so glad for that.. :D
@Kajal i meant those small fictions u try sometimes....maybe don't actually attempt it...but just a few words say so much...and the variety and talent seen in all creativity is immense and what there in categorizing.....and obviously i love ur work and u know that :D
ReplyDeletethanks for the kind words Nabs... :)
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