April 14, 2009

Road to nowhere !!

I
walk
the path
to the land
of the immortals
Destiny silent,hear no sound
Where the hungry immortals will carry my soul.

7 comments:

  1. keep going hashan .. you are on cruise with your new hobby :)

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  2. hey, why in good lord's name is this poem tagged "attempted poetry" than "brilliant poetry"??

    change it hashan! :)

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  3. FIB poetry is very popular in this place!
    very frequent post!
    always very good too!
    :)
    great job again!

    :)
    god bless!

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  4. Thank you Prats,Ragpicker, Leo,vitruvian boy,Pulkit for dropping by and sweet sweet comments :))

    haha..Ok leo from the next time will not label as attempted.

    Love you so much :))

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