It was tough,
letting you go,
but its even tougher,
getting familiar with your absence.
It was tough,
hurling abuses at you,
but its even tougher,
recollecting them now.
It was tough,
ignoring your presence,
but its even tougher,
resisting your absence now.
It was tough,
Living with you,
but its even tougher,
Existing without you.
it was tough
ReplyDeletereading between the lines
but its even tougher
writing a comment to your work
nice work dear...nicely put up..!!!
you're poetry is just brilliant! i agree with yami, it is difficult to write a comment to ur work! :)
ReplyDeleteso very painful !!
ReplyDeleteI know how it feels especially regretting the abuses!! I know how that feels :(
ReplyDeleteand you made me write too !!
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ReplyDeleteI second yamini... reading between the lines..... where all the pain is...
ReplyDeleteThat well writen i mean...
Cheers..!!
Arjun
@Yamini, Rashi, Arjun
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure!
@ Leo, Prats
ReplyDeleteYou guys made my day!
@Mohita,
ReplyDeleteu made our day too! u inspired us! :)
thanks! :)
Painful..and yea indeed its very difficult to fill such voids..
ReplyDeleteinspirational mohita! and yeah poignant in its own way!
ReplyDeleteit's lovely yer!!
lovely post....
ReplyDeleteYes its so true that we cant live without our near and dear frds... :)