April 21, 2009

Irresistible - 8

Continued from Kajal's Post




The kiss we share intoxicates,
more than wine;as you
hold me close;
heartbeat
gone
numb.



@ Pulkit ... We are waiting for your words !!

13 comments:

  1. wow!! :) 8 contributions to the irresistible series...!! and each one raising the temperature higher.. this one was so beautiful..kudos Pratsie. :)


    @Pulkit: your take is awaited.. :P

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  2. everytime i write, i have to imagine 100 things and feel a few things to write just these 6 lines !! M just happy that i am not making the matters cold ...

    ps: i wrote a bit more suggestive lines but then edited to the current version ;)


    and now lets wait till we hear from Pulkit !

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  3. Goodness me, this is still peaking. Maybe I should've chosen a later date to post something different.
    anyways I love it! so keep it going everybody!

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  4. no pisku !! i welcome the different flavour in reading !! just read and commented on your post ! thanks for reading mine :)

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  5. Sometimes, when I read you, I feel irresistible too... I really feel it!!!

    I wanted to write something too... then, I was never irresitible myself... but the poem series was... so, I wrote!!

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  6. i am in love with this new style!

    beautiful poetry prats !

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  7. @ prats - wont let u down I hope...
    my reply coming on in a few minutes!
    let me read the louge first!
    :)
    smiles back!
    I respect ur warm wait!
    :)
    feeling special! dimple smiles!

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  8. Have tried on irresistible series after reading this :)) thanks for the inspiration :D

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  9. Thanks a ton Tan for joining in !! i knew you would not resist much ;)

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  10. @Aparna : thanks !! i await your write dear now ...

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  11. @Pulkit ,, well you started this all !! and i really liked your take :) go on !!

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  12. @Hashan : you are just awesome !! amazed me really with the brilliant lines :)

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