April 21, 2009

Irresistible - 6

Continued from Kajal's post here



Since your first touch,Our hearts beat
as one;Just the souls
await your
touch on
my
skin.


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13 comments:

  1. oh! A six line composition again!
    now irresistible series is a great label!
    but though FIB as u mentioned can vary with lines... I suppose We have to have a common vote on its length !! 3 of them are 6 and 3 of them are 7 line works!
    whats the length which I should prefer to continue with this one now...
    I would like to go for 7!
    ...

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  2. as far as this particular piece is concerned...
    it was a good one again!
    :)

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  3. let it be anything more than 6 Pulkit !! coz as you can see, for this particualr idea, i could not add another 13 words ;) !!

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  4. prats :)) you did it again :D
    Irresistable flavour..keep going :)

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  5. You bunch of talented writer wont stop creating magic, will you?? Never!!

    That was awesome!
    BTW...
    Irresistible!! is the word!!

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  6. Dont make things so romantic na :(
    Make me feel mushy inside and there is no1 to hug :(

    I loved the pic! I have this crazy expression on my face and m hugging hobbsie who is my teddy

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  7. glad you agree Pulkit !!


    @Yamini : thanks :)

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  8. Its really irresisitble Hashan ;) !! u know wat i mean rt ?


    thanksie Aparna !

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  9. @StoryTeller : can magic be controlled ?? ;)


    @Raash : some how i agree with you ... need to love some one really ;)

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