April 14, 2009

I - the sinned

A continuation of Hashan's poem

The ugly scary me howling middle in the night.
sinister lives feast on my wounds;
stripped of dignity
naked thoughts;
gateway
to
hell.
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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousTuesday, April 14, 2009 1:08:00 PM

    pratsie,
    i loved it a lot!

    even more with first half of hashan's together read! :)

    good one!

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  2. Story TellerTuesday, April 14, 2009 1:59:00 PM

    Good Poem... well written :)

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  3. hasHAN hazaRIKATuesday, April 14, 2009 2:04:00 PM

    Fantastic Prats..!! perfect :))

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  4. AnonymousTuesday, April 14, 2009 2:17:00 PM

    Glad you liked it Vinay !! thanks :)

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  5. AnonymousTuesday, April 14, 2009 2:18:00 PM

    @Storyteller : thanks :)


    @Hashan : Oh!! your comment was much awaited :) glad you approved this :)

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  6. hTuesday, April 14, 2009 3:04:00 PM

    Awesome pratuuuu

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  7. AnonymousTuesday, April 14, 2009 8:04:00 PM

    thanku Abhri !!

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  8. The Vitruvian BoyWednesday, April 15, 2009 1:48:00 AM

    Bravo....
    keep going on.....and on... :)

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  9. AnonymousWednesday, April 15, 2009 10:41:00 PM

    this one was strong pratsie. :)

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  10. AnonymousWednesday, April 15, 2009 11:09:00 PM

    thanks Pink !!

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