April 14, 2009

I - the sinned

A continuation of Hashan's poem

The ugly scary me howling middle in the night.
sinister lives feast on my wounds;
stripped of dignity
naked thoughts;
gateway
to
hell.

10 comments:

  1. pratsie,
    i loved it a lot!

    even more with first half of hashan's together read! :)

    good one!

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  2. @Storyteller : thanks :)


    @Hashan : Oh!! your comment was much awaited :) glad you approved this :)

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