April 15, 2009

Did I ask for more???



Had Ask for love my lord...
did I ask for more???
let me die within her arms...
am I asking for more???


so many wishes made till date,
none of those answered!
So many promises made in return,
still none of those answered!


Heart aspiring to remind u once again,
If I Had ask for more???
let me die within her arms...
am I asking for more???


give my love to me my lord
without her whom would
My heart cry for...
My soul desire for...


I Had ask for something which was mine
did I ask for more???
let me die within her arms...
am I asking for more???


My luck is in a habit of...
never listening to me!
Torturing me by watching
a new dream every day!


Beg u! Oh! Listen to my call someday...
did I ask for more???
let me die within her arms...
am I asking for more???



- (POETIC CRIES)
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6 comments:

  1. dearest readers of this post!
    hope u would like this...
    just a random thought... inspired by a song... an easy guess for fanatics of music like me.... :D
    wont let it out though...

    !!

    will come for thursday theft tomorrow...

    cya then....!!

    (have a poem to be posted tomorrow too...
    at my personal blog... for
    which I post in once a week, that one is my own personal life reflection !!
    hope to see u there too....

    regards
    PULKIT
    (http://19goes20.blogspot.com)

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  2. i loved the poem pulkit! :)

    but the title shd be "did i ask for more" not "asked" :)

    as my friend pranav always says, see u when i see u! :) at u blog that is! :)

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  3. wow...enjoyed yr poetry....
    can relate to yr poem.... :)

    keep posting..... :)

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  4. poor poor response on comment box!
    :(
    just 2 comments...

    anyways....

    thanks a lot leo!

    thanks vitruvian boy!

    il try to correct title...

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  5. @ vitruvian boy- have changed the title !!
    sorry for the delay in this...
    :)
    hope its all fine now!
    thanks for the correction!

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