April 23, 2009

Irresistible - 17

continued from Pulkit's post


My
skin
wet from
your kisses;
warm from your hot breath;
comes alive in your loving hands -
rejenuvated i smile with my eyes,heart responds to your caring touch


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Did I do justic to your words Pulkit ?

11 comments:

  1. wow!! perfect justice.. my hands are itching too to write a reply to pulkit's too.. :D.. likhu?

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  2. 10 on 10!! thats the cleanest possible reply ( grins! ) u came out of the trap laid...
    :)
    he he he....
    hugs!
    hey kajal - ur shot/... likhoooooooooo!
    (shouts! ) waiting for it too...

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  3. the environment out here is getting hotter :D
    Prats ur too good man ....not a better reply could have come abt :D

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  4. @ mysterious gal - total agreement!

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  5. My goodness :)) it was awesome..Hottest one in irresistible series :D and the perfect reply to Pulkit's.

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  6. Amazing, amazing! Wow :) It's gettin hot in here!

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  7. its good

    but last line...i still feel that its against fib count...

    guess

    fibonacci series
    is

    1 1 2 3 5 8 13

    last line i see more than 13 syllable

    correct me if im wrong!

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  8. pratsie. loved ur words.

    but the first word is "rejuvenated" not "rejenuvated"

    and that word has five syllables. which puts ur count at 18 for last line. teeth counter took rejenuvated as 0 syllables becoz its NOT a word! :)

    do change it!

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  9. Firstly i admit its not a fib .. i did not check properly ... wanted to edit it but lazy now !!

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  10. and then .. THANKS !!
    i appreciate you people reading and encouraging my words as always !! :)

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