Continued from Rashi's words here
Is it love, is start hating
hating enough to kill it in me,
me - devoid of any heart,
heart that once had no worry.
Worry i do not even now -
now that I have gone lifeless,
lifeless i walk away from all,
All emotions left at turn of "No Acess"
well u r d teacher...i am d student..need i comment??..
ReplyDeleteits to good :)
finally !!!! some one read it ;) !! i tried loop poetry for the first tiem here !! so wanted to jsut know if i really made some sense !!
ReplyDeletei loved it prats...specially the last line
ReplyDelete"all emotions left at turn of no acess"
kudos gal
honestly i learn so much from ur poetry every day
@ prats - ur the queen of poetic replies!
ReplyDeletewonderful.. :)
ReplyDelete@Tweety : we all r learners here !!
ReplyDelete@Pulkit : it was just my thoughts !!
@Kajal : Thanks !! :D