April 23, 2009

Chain Poetry 2 (Gave All Till Now)

The last to fall
Fall beneath
Beneath sorrow
Sorrow underneath

Underneath pain
Pain of lost love
Love that I gave
Gave all till now

7 comments:

  1. nice one !! i will try to continue soon :)

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  2. nice one vinay...!!!

    And sry prats..i continued his already :(

    u continue mine !!!!

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  3. this is a particular style of poetry..naam bhoool gaya.. you were telling me about it the other day.. :D wonderful!!

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  4. n i just realized its a loop poem again !! enough ! i am gonna write it now too !!

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  5. leo loved it man....each word pierces the heart...

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