April 20, 2009

bleeding mascara!




She waited for her prince to come. She wore her red dress. She wore the bangles, her make immaculate. Her kohl-lined eyes filled with dreams of a perfect tomorrow. Her pink lips were adorned by a smile which only a bride-to-be could wear. But he never saw this. All he left behind was bleeding mascara.She waited for her prince to come. She wore her red dress. She wore the bangles, her make immaculate. Her kohl-lined eyes filled with dreams of a perfect tomorrow. Her pink lips were adorned by a smile which only a bride-to-be could wear. But he never saw this. All he left behind was bleeding mascara.


A song and Aparna's poem (Sorry) made me write this... :)

 

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10 comments:

  1. AnonymousMonday, April 20, 2009 1:45:00 AM

    this write can tear anyone's heart apart... :( so painful..and perfectly put..only you could do this girl!! kudos! this is what I call mindblowing!!

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  2. mysterious galMonday, April 20, 2009 2:33:00 AM

    Superb...i told u already that this is one piece with deep undertones and the inside out of situations which r ought to be right...but sometimes they aren't.....just awesome...and u know how much i loved it :D

    i can actually imagine the girl in red attire with those teary eyes waiting.....its the worse thing that can happen to neone....as whatever kind a girl one is...her marriage is always a kind of a dream situation and when it breaks....the heavens too can explode

    one again loved it girl ur just too good ...:D

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  3. Aparna (Life Takes)Monday, April 20, 2009 9:54:00 AM

    very painful rashi...nicely dealt

    i pity the girl so much

    with ur crisp description i could vividly imagine the bride in tears

    keep it up :)

    and sorry for wht..? everyone can have their own views

    cheers :)

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  4. AnonymousMonday, April 20, 2009 10:04:00 AM

    really wonderful !! perfectly poignant

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  5. yamini meduriMonday, April 20, 2009 10:17:00 AM

    wat do i say??? who can be more sad than this girl..!!!

    nice write up friend..!!!

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  6. AshritaMonday, April 20, 2009 10:30:00 AM

    I could literally imagine the girl! Amazing work!

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  7. PULKITMonday, April 20, 2009 12:50:00 PM

    slapping usage of painful direct speech in clear sentences... thats a straight from heart! clear to all readers ... good one!

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  8. piskuMonday, April 20, 2009 12:58:00 PM

    being able to convey emotions in words so few is a gift!

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  9. hasHAN hazaRIKAMonday, April 20, 2009 2:48:00 PM

    very nicely written !!

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  10. NikMonday, April 20, 2009 7:16:00 PM

    Once again, someone did it.... A very poignant collection of words.. again! by YOU! so nothing to be surprised about.....

    Keep up the good work..!!

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